I'm rereading your wonderful fic (that I still prefer to this day over OotP!) and I'm so glad you've kept it up online. I've always sided with Harry against Hermione and Will in this chapter, losing a parent-figure on top of everything else!

How thrilled I was wen I ran across this fic again, you have no idea! I had started reading this wen I was in 7th grade (I'm 24 now:) and this is e every bit as amazing as I remember. Somehow you combined one of my absolute favorite worlds (Will/TDiR series) with the more modern magic of JKR's Harry Potter. I'm so happy I remembered this well enough after all these years to look for this again and it's now complete-yay! Thank you for taking the time to create a truly believable fusion between two of my favorite worlds.

Oh, wow! That was amazing! Your writing is really good, and I like your style. The two series were blended seamlessly. It felt real, in a way. Like this actually happened. Your characterizations were perfect, and everyone seemed so human (well, powerful immortal being of the Light if you count Will, but otherwise...). They were all true to their characters, and while I would've liked it if everyone's favorite Old One was a little less cold, I think that wouldn't have been him, if you know what I mean.

I was ecstatic when I found a sequel to Town and Gown, not to mention a fully complete HP/DIR crossover, and one so well-written, too. I liked the idea behind this.

And no, it wasn't too morbid, although I can stand quite a lot of blood and death in written work. But why Mrs. Weasley? I miss her. And who would kill a healer? Eh. Apparently authors. I have to employ that tactic next time I write.

The final battle in the time out of Time was a little confusing, but I supposed that was supposed to happen. Also, did Will ever tell them about the way the Old Ones can manipulate Time? I feel like he didn't, somehow.

Anyways , great story!

Ailavyn Siniyash

Iron for the birthday, bronze carried long;

Wood from the burning, stone out of song;

Fire in the candle-ring, water from the thaw;

Six Signs the circle, and the Grail gone before.

Fire on the mountain shall find the harp of gold

Played to wake the Sleepers, oldest of the old;

Power from the greenwitch, lost beneath the sea;

All shall find the light at last, silver on the tree.

Ahhhhh, what an utterly amazing read this has been. ;o; JUST FABULOUS and AHHHHHHHH HUG THE BEST HUG I LOVE THE HUG A LOT even more than I love Remus and Sirius and Harry's AWESOME HOME LIFE although that is also very awesome! BUT AHHHHHHH WILL YOU NEEDED A HUG, DUDE.

Just fabulous work. *hearts* I LOVE IT.

Awwwwwww, linguistic developments in sixteenth-century dialects sounds fascinating!

BUT OH MAN, WHAT A CLIFFHANGER D: HARRY WHAT ON EARTH IS WRONG

Can I just say here that oh my gosh, Sirius and Remus getting to be Harry's proper legal guardians has MADE MY NIGHT. ;o; SO HEARTWARMING AND WONDERFUL. Ffffffff yes please be a family forever.

... and oh, Will. You miss Merriman a lot, don't you. D: Poor guy.

Ahhhhhh I love this story terrifically so far, but HOW MUCH DO I LOVE that Will fears turning into Merriman? SO MUCH. Will you are wonderful and adorable. \o/

WOW! That was a truly awesome story. I heartily congratulate you for writing it and seeing it through to the end.

Your story is fantastic. Flawlessly written, with a complex and engaging plot. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for writing it and livening up my weekend. x

I wasn't going to review until I'd finished the story, but this chapter was so lovely that I had to. Words (mine at least) can't express how much I liked that last bit, with the two of them sharing the hymn.

Excellent handling of crossover. Action-packed but not too fast-paced, and I applaud your interpretation of a grown-up Will. He seems to me to be immensely lonely, just like Merriman.

Ouch. Obviously this is the sequel I was looking for, but it's so long! Hm, I think I'll come back later and read it when I have more time.

Things that would only look slightly tacky with Will in his own context look like a Disneyland T-shirt and a passel of plastic flamingos in this one. That said, good work. And I daresay you've gotten better about things like that in four years.

This is a most brilliant story. Impossibly brilliant, but you somehow managed to pull it off.