Lol Riku is a poor sad man

Roxas learned to fall for Sora the hard way.

Lol I was about to say 'just turn it into a threesome' but then I saw your description

Lol Sora is such a Gary stu, it's sickening XD

Sora is being awfully nice to someone who had just forced himself up his ass.

As interesting as your story sounds, it just does not make sense. Rape victims don't recover from such trauma overnight and sure as hell don't put ice on their rapist's bruises (unless they are being awesomely stupid).

I hate to sound like one of those people and I don't mean to sound judgemental, but you're taking this rape issue too lightly. Not to say you should shudder at the mere mention, but at least show a bit of reality when writing these.

"I can eat ice-cream and watch TV. I'm not feeling any danger at all!"

30 mins later and his virtue was fucked. Literally.

He literally doesn't give a fuck he was being kidnapped and stuck away from civilization. Could someone seriously be this stupidly carefree!

Even if this is never officially ended, I still think that this is (for the most part) a nice way to end it, thank you for making this roller coaster of a story, it was a genuinely nice read.

I love all of this! But I'm all sad that Roxy's alone! D: I can't wait for the next part!

Wow! One of the best Kh stories I've read so far. Please continue soon with your awesomeness!-

Maybe, if I wish hard enough, you'll update some! T.T I need this! T.T I love the angst and everything in between! Try to you can!

I did! I knew it since the third or fourth chapter! Love the story. Keep up the good work.

Fairly certain my heart just broke a little.

So I guess no akuroku or soriku, oh well.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww a chapter :D:D:D:D i'm so happy!Y!Y!YY!Y!Y!~ poor riku T_T maybe he can get together with Ven :D:D can't wait for the next chapter!~