Reviews for Lost Cause
Michelle Law chapter 20 . 5/12
This is my guess: Bella's supposed birthdate is wrong; could Renee have been pregnant when she left Charlie, and given the baby up for adoption? Could Charlie and Renee had a daughter who died shortly after birth?
TheDarkAngel25 chapter 26 . 5/7/2019
Just wondering if you're ever going to finish this story, I'm interested to find out what happened to Bella. I've added the fic to my Alerts too
RogueAlly chapter 26 . 1/8/2018
In a way, I wish I hadn’t followed a story rec to this. It drew me in. I want to know what’s going on with Bella’s “past.” Is she reincarnated? Is this a different timeline?

And what about her eventual change. How does it happen? Do James and Victoria show up? Does he bite her, so the Cullens won’t be responsible? Do they let the change happen? (I hope so. That was the stupidest part of the original. Seriously, they already had the perfect story set up with her having run from Charlie’s and her mom not being in Arizona. Anything could have happened to her.)

I know it’s been five years since you updated. There’s probably little hope for a continuation/completion now, but just know that you have at least one interested reader if you do choose to continue.
scarlson31 chapter 26 . 7/24/2017
Oh please, please tell me you are coming back to this? It is sooo good and I truly want to know the rest of the story!
landapanda chapter 9 . 7/2/2017
I'm really, really loving this story.
Harmony chapter 24 . 11/4/2015
This is good, though I wish you would continue so we could find out what exactly caused her to end up in the woods with no memory.
BellaCullen042195 chapter 26 . 8/30/2014
Okay I read all of this story so fast... I need more... I have been reading it at work... and at home... until like 3 o clock in the morning. I need closure! Please!
BellaCullen042195 chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
I really really enjoy this story. I like how you set up events and how the love bugs didn't get too attached too fast. Please write more sooon! 3
puss-is-in-boots chapter 26 . 5/18/2013
I love this story so far! i really hope you're going to finish it because id love to read the rest! I was disappointed to find out it was left unfinished
cutieheart365 chapter 26 . 4/27/2013
I really like this story! I hope you update soon
cela chapter 9 . 4/8/2013
carnac the magnificent? johnny carson?
Elizabeth keitz chapter 26 . 4/1/2013
I really like it you should keep going
love bite chapter 24 . 2/19/2013
I am getting worried here that this whole thing is in her mind, and we are seeing her fantasy life as she escapes mentally from some terrible thing that is happening to her in "real" life. That would suck.

But, I am enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing.
love bite chapter 19 . 2/16/2013
This is so intriguing. I am so curious about what is going on.
love bite chapter 11 . 2/14/2013
Perhaps this has already been mentioned, but the term is "scarfed my food" not "scoffed my food." If you are open to constructive feedback, I found the constant use of italics a bit too much.
As always, a wonderful story...makes me want to keep reading!
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