wow this was different kind of one shot, but it was a good one.

Loved it!

This is wonderful...utterly wonderful...i'm truly amazed

Lovely stuff. Very cinematic and evocative. You've done more in under 500 words than some authors in one of those turgid 10,000-word chapters.

Writing anything full-length?

I just stumbled across this last night, I know you wrote it eons ago. This is beautifully done and such a compelling story idea! Excellent job, thank you for sharing!

xoxo

JuJu

Love it. :-)

Amazing.

- Devonna Ransom (Future World Dictator)

Perfeito...!

Nice little piece...very descriptive. I could see everything as it happpened. I always like the idea of a vengeful Bella rather than the weak and rather wimpy clumsy girl we get in most stories.

I wish it had been longer!

Wow.

First taste of Aro/Bella and I don't know how the other stories will meet the expectation you set :)

So good. I never envisioned Aro as Harod but now I can. Edward doesn't make a John the Baptist but Bella does play the Salome part perfectly and it would be Edward's head she would want on a platter. Hm I think you are a genius. What could you do with Jezabel...Delilah?

OMG! i love the story, u shouldnt have had it end there, you should have made the story longer, starting before this scene and leading up to it and finally ending with getting wat she wants

Oh, how I love this story :) I hope you might continue it. Otherwise, this chapter alone was thoroughly beautiful. Update soon, if at all.

wow...awesome writing...this would make a good full length story :)

Very beautiful! I loved it!