Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

Thanks for the update!

Lemons pls.

TheBestLikeNoOneEverWas

All they need is a death defying adventure that requires a trust exercise much like what Ash does on a daily basis to gain random pokemon trust

amazing your doing great wish I wrote this well.

This could be a great story without the lemons, but it's up to you. I'm enjoying it so far, keep it up!

Well this is great.

only write lemons is you or the story call for them you are doing beautifully keep going!

other than changing Lulu to a male after spark wonderful the beginning of a great story I want more you have real talent.

Why not take some episodes and twist them for your own? There was that season with larvitar not trusting humans for a while. Is she a trainer taking the league challenge? Just traveling around? Looking for legendaries?

It is a great story, keep going I would like to know what happens next. I would like the Lucario to start getting more and more trusting toward the girl he is traveling with and they run in to Kule at some point farther down the road and he is scared of him at first and grabs onto her. That's what I think should happen to finish off the friendship between the two. But it's your story so you decide. You've obviously had a great idea. Just go with what you have the story will turn out great in the end of you keep going.

Looove it! Can't wait for more, dove through all three chapters. Keep developing the characters like you have and you're on my top five list! Please write more!

I'd really like to see more about him healing and recovering from the trauma, before anything else.
Bath time will be interesting, and seeing as he's malnourished, going into how he's recovering from that would be good.
He'd need a specialized diet until he put on more weight, maybe some very light exercise once his injuries heal.
From experience, the difference between being malnourished and being healthy are staggering. In his current state, he'll be very weak, prone to fainting spells, and will have to be fed careful amounts, since too much at once will make him sick and possibly kill him from his body rejecting it.
Foods that are too rich can also be hard to handle, and he may crave sweets more, due to the extra calories that are usually in them.
Well, that's just from my experience anyways. He's a Pokémon so idk.
I do like the story though, and am curious to see how it goes.
Especially with notes of paranoia and such that Kyle will find him again. Possibly Lucario being able to fight back.
And instead of healing by forgiving his abuser, having him accept that it's okay to not forgive.

Damn you for making me like this story.

Awesome chapter!