Hi there,

I'd love to read more of this fic.
Will you be updating it at some point (soon?)...?

oh my, you can't just let the story end there? I don't know who the stalker is and I wanna hear what Charlie has to say.

I know it's been a long time but PLEASE continue the story! Please..

Hmm.. So far I'm liking it. Your writing style's really nice and it's pure enjoyment to read:)

Hi! this story is great, I had a lot of fun reading it. Please go ahead. Next chapters!

this is awesome I'd love to see more of charlie and edward!

I just found this story today and I could not stop reading it. I am hooked on it. I am looking forward to finding out how everything plays out.

I like Charlie...and what was up with Renee and the whole "officer" thing? Do I sense a naughty Charlie? Hmmm? Anyway, I am so happy to see you return with an update. I hope RL calms down for you. I know a lot writers are having problems with RL right now, myself included... But yeah, an update! Squee!

I love that Charlie went into protective mode and checked out everyone :) And that Edward seems to pass his tests ;)

Not happy about James being gone, but he might not have gotten himself scarce. Someone else might have done that :(

ttfn

Ardanwen

You're back! & everything is right in the world again! ((Hugs))

Charlie is my hero! I'm sitting at my daughters school reading this update & when Charlie said "What woman" I actually laughed/snorted. All the parents looked at me as if I've lost the plot... Do I care... No! Lol

So glad to see you're back & updating ;)

You're back! & everything is right in the world again! ((Hugs))

Charlie is my hero! I'm sitting at my daughters school reading this update & when Charlie said "What woman" I actually laughed/snorted. All the parents looked at me as if I've lost the plot... Do I care... No! Lol

So glad to see you're back & updating ;)

Yay! I was so happy to see an update!

I really liked Charlie's POV. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a great story!

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD. LOVED CHARLIE'S POV. CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. UPDATE SOON!

I usually don't like more than two POV in a story (it gets to confusing sometimes). However, I like looking at Bella and this situation from Chief Swan's POV. He is methodically, where Bella is emotional, and Edward is blindly in love. So when the story calls for it, it's nice to get another perspective. You had a Jacob POV in a much earlier chapter. I think it's time to go back and read it because I got the impression that he was possessive and dangerous.

"What woman?" Lol soooo funny.

Hey thanks for the update :o) And I think Edward has been through enough with Bella lately to know what sort of crap shes dealing with! I know Charlie is her father but sometimes they just have to step back! She is totally in love with Edward and vice versa and Charlie should be happy with that! Not interrogating Edward! Cya next time :o) Chilly x