Oh SO HOT!

I need a cold shower!

I very much think Jake would be the sweet sensual lover with a raw animalistic wild side.. Excellent work!

I'm slowly making my way to reading everything on your list.. just takes me a while! Great job :)

And I love your BLOG too btw :)

OMJB! This was so amazing. You are an beautiful writer. Keep up the magnificent job!

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Wish you well in the contest...but...its a winner already in my eyes!

You do have Jacob's entire being down extraordinarily well...

He's an absolute love...not enough guys out there like him!

He's so easy to write when you love him, huh!

you are a good writer so i'll just change niki to bella in word and enjoy itD

lol sorry, it's just that i don't like OCs no offense

Great one-shot. I struggled with the books and wasn't able to finish the saga cos it made me so mad. But I fell in love with Jacob and started to read fanfics to get my fix. I'm so glad you set him up with someone outside the Twilight universe. I don't think that Bella deserves him, he's way too good for her and there aren't any other females in the saga that I would put him with. Leah, maybe...

I liked the premise for your story, the set-up was great and very original. Top marks for your writing style and voice, it reads effortlessly. And, wow, that lemon was hot. Your cocky, pushy Jacob Black is awesome. I love 'talkers' so I was all kinds of turned on. My only mistake was reading it on an evening that my boyfriend wasn't calling round.

So sorry I didn't know about this SOB challenge in time to vote for you. Next time, hey?

Damn that was... HOT!

very very good job!

Dude, that's super sweet that you wrote a story like that for your friend. I would very much like to be inserted into such a story *coughs and kicks own friends*

Srsly tho that was all sorts of hot. Awesome job, best of luck!

Holy... You get better and better~! Though the actual sex part might have lasted longer? Since it is a oneshot, the plot is believable and oh-so-exciting! A fantasy come true? ;)

That was definitely hot! I liked it.

Congratulations LovesJakeBlack,

Your submission for the SORT OF BEAUTIFUL CHALLENGE has been accepted! We are pleased for you to be a part of the contest and wish you the best of luck!

Team SOB

I love all of your ones shots and the the club. I became addicted to that one...They're all awesome and I love them. You really bring out the Jacob that I've wanted to see...he wasn't in the Twilight series. I guess with it being teen and all they couldn't do these things! I am definite about me deciding to switch to team Jacob, but these stories made me fall in love with his character. Keep up the good work and please update as soon as you can!

LOL, Flower, where oh where have I heard that song.

OMJ, Jake is so damn sexy and what a tease, I would be hypnotized the moment he licked the pen. aww so cute when he tapped and puckered. LOL, I give the landing when Niki tripped a 10.

WHOA! I was speechless as soon as he lay that blankie. That was one sweet hot lemony goodness to go with their ;-)picnic. I think my mouth watered,lol

*cough cough*

*loosening collar*

It was um, very very, vivid.

Awesome! I HAVE to thank you for doing this for your sisters :-D

Keep up the awesome job!

:D (That's seriously all I gotta say lol) Love it ;)