frighteningly beautiful.

i really liked this.

I TOTALLY GET IT.

This is about how Axel raped a girl (Kairi) when he was younger, and now that he's older and dating his soul mate (Namine), he regrets it. Now, it's haunting him, but he doesn't know how to make it right.

I feel bad for him because he wants to be forgiven, but he doesn't know how.

:3

I couldn't make it past the first sentence...THE FIRST FRICKIN SENTENCE..wah wah wah I threw up.

Oh my God. Axel...

the monster.

That is just like... whoa.

Again and again, you make me cry and be happy and be angry.

At Axel.

x times a million

Bad? Shame on you. This is some pretty deep/dark/awesome writing. I love the way you manage to evoke character and loss in such a short canvas, Ana. Really awesome, and you know I love your work and you. So give your writing more credit, because it's freakin' unqiue.

Love this. Love this.

- court.