I love this story. Its a pity its not updated more frequently. Or at least got another chapter for me to read lol. I do look forward to reading the third, the fourth, the fifth, etc chapters :) I really do. So I know people must ask a lot but do you think you can prioritize the next chapter or two? Just those! I'll be content with a single update. Hopefully one that's soon.

And before I forget :) thank you for taking time out of your day to have created and written this story. Thank you.

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Can this fic have a different ending then the original 'Kikka No Chigiri'? Because, in essence, it's a bit of a tragedy (it isn't looked at that way in the story but in my opinion it is).

Please keep writing this.

lol, i'm currently writing an assignment about akinari's story. searching the internet all day has certainly been very tiring, but now that i found your fiction my energy level is back up again.

you definitely made my day x3

though it's been awhile since your last update, i hope that you haven't given up on the story.

O.O Take your time, but I hope it will be worth the wait! the opening two chapters were great~

Take your time in updating this. This chapter was worth the wait. Well written as always, and I just like how you write Kurogane and Fai. Their interaction feels natural to me. I especially like the part about the soup. XD

And Happy Belated Birthday! Sorry for the lateness, hope you had a good one. ;;

Can't wait for the next chapter *w*

haha it's getting more interesting. Keep it up and I hope you update soon )

Very interesting and good start. ) on to chapter 2

Fai and his mistery, if he would tell something about himself without any complain he would not be Fai anymore XD. love it, i'm curious about who he is and how it will end... kuro will return home and not see him never again...? *sad*

it sure is a priority now-I mean if your basing this off a short story, yu have the plo lain out, and by the way you write it, it's obvious your descriptions and timing are a cakewalk. What a great relationship they start off with!

.gee! I love the adjectives you use to describe your characters and settings, it is so bbeautiful that I feel like I actually AM the protagonist...keep going!

Great job with this one! Can't wait for the next!

wow, how cute :) i love your stories and would definitely like to read more.

i like this. please update soon

A really good start. I got to say it again: great imagery. I like how you set up the story and the character interaction. I'll definitely see if I can check out the story this is based on.

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Corrections/Feedback:

{It panics him for a moment, makes him fear he may be caught off-guard as this stranger busies himself about him but his motions set Kurogane slightly more at ease, smooth and careful.} I believe there should be a comma after "about him."

{‘Gladly’ Kurogane thought to himself with a smirk, latching out only to find his arm trembled and felt like a leaden weight against his body.} A comma after "'Gladly'"