Loved loved and loved the story...Ya it was xtremely OOC till end when ash directly confessed his love to her ( I know he was too slow ) ...He could have stuttered or felt nervous ...Story could have been better ...BT still It will be on my top list for next few millennia

sweet story!

I thought it was good.

Awesome story

You should REALLY make a sequel to this! :) that would totally be AWESOME!

Superb!

that was so nice _ a perfect fluffy one shot!

One of the best stories i've read

Good story. Really liked it...

OOC and cute. MAY AND ASH SITTING IN A TREE K-I-S-S-I-N-G! HAHA! I can't WAIT to see Ash in a contest XD that'd be the day!

that was suprsingly realy good for a oneshot.

I really liked it.

Really cute

This was so beautiful it could be cleary seen I hope you make a sequel

I should call that cute, and I never call things cute :P

You should have told us which place Ash got in the Sinnoh league.

Good story!

Ah, the Sakura Tree. An emblem of love and affection. Who doesn't love the use of this in Animes with Cherry Blossoms flowing through the wind as to create a romantic scenery. Good choice of setting.

"She hadn’t seen Ash since they split at the Wallace cup, 6months ago." Here you missed a space here. I know that its not that big of an error, but it is worth pointing out. Well is other than that you don't seem to have anymore spelling errors.

Well lastly I love the way you fluffed up most of the story(I can't believe I just said that). Good Job.

Can you pwese make a sequel? About May and Ash to Sinnoh? Cuz I totally loved the story Ma fav of all times!