Hey VArwen

I know its a long time since you finished this fanfiction. But after I just finished play fable 3 for the hundreds of times. I just felt like reading some good old fanfic. And I found yours.
And boy am I glad that I did!

Loved your character Jaina, and how you didn't compromised her and the other fable II characters through your story. Which was a delight, because to many fanfictions nowadays, doesn't honor the fable characters that Lionhead studios made, and twist them into something that isn't them at all.
Again, fantastic writing, fantastic story, and a very nice ending.

Kudos to you, and thank you so much for this lovely story!

Michael! NO! STAY!

sorry about that.

Ok I read all three of them. I even commented on Absence before this one... I love your writing and I loved your Sparrow. I've only seen two fanfics who got Reaver's personality perfectly, and this is one of them!

Your story actually made me cry. Damn Jaina and her morality! Bring Michael back! Keep writing you're really good at it!

Second read-through! God, I love this story. You are just such an amazing writer. I LOVE YOU! (maybe)

Awesome. I love how Blade isn't all "I welcome your gratitude and sympathies, Albion! In fact, I love to be pitied yet manipulated at the same time with these mundane quests you force upon me!" as I have seen in other fics. Reaver-drool- is still Reaver and his personality doesn't change (like I have seen, again, in other fics). Thank you for this series and please continue with your works!

I really don't understand why this doesn't ahve more reviews! Honestly, I thought your story was stunning and compelling. If there were any gramar/spelling errors then I was way too wrapped up in reading to notice them. I thought your version of Sparrow wasn't completely unlike a lot of the Sparrows that Fanfiction has seen, however, your Jaina definitely had a spark that was all her own! Your Rever was considerablly darker and less flippant then I would ahve expected, but all together refreshing! I hope you continue, and I'll go check up on your sequel now. :]

I don't know if I should be jumping for joy that it's finished or extremely sad it's the end. Either way, most wondrous story, a tragic ending but almost all real hero stories are. I'm glad you stuck to the actual ending versus a more cliche happy one, it makes the story that much more amazing. Anyhow, excellent story!

Aw... Poor Jaina. Despite what had to be HALLUCINATION Michael telling her to do the 'right thing' and waste her only wish on people she doesn't know, she should have done the selfish thing and wish for her husband and kids back. They're what matter most to her, not all those other people she doesn't know, and will probably never meet once their alive again. *lol*

Those people who've probably been dead for YEARS, like Rose, who's families have probably moved on with their lives, with new spouses and children now, suddenly have husbands, wives, etc. who disappeared without a trace years ago suddenly popping back into their lives again.

Other than getting the adoration and gratitude of thousands of people who get THEIR loved ones back, Jaina should be miserable without HER beloved husband and children, children who's lives were ended before they even had a chance to truly begin. She even lost her dog who's been with her since that fateful night that started everything, which also makes him the longest lived dog ever. *lol*

I realize I'm a bit behind in the reviewing, but I just finished this story and I absolutely loved it.

Reaver is that guy I hate to love, and you wrote his character wonderfully. I cannot wait to read the sequel (which I'm going to start in about 1 minute)! Wonderful work and I look forward to reading more.

I didn't feel anything but a sick feeling in my stomach in the end. But the rest was interesting. I'd never have been able to choose Sacrifice. :(

Good story though.

Sucks to be Reaver at this point in both the story and the game... if Lucien doesn't kill him, Jaina most definately WILL at some point.

Oh my lordy, reading all 26 chapters certainly didn't help my eyesight, but it was well worth it! This story was fantastic and brilliantly written! It's always wonderful to see a Reaver fan, just because we all know he is amazingly beastly! Anywho, I am off to look at that sequel! Fantastic!

Aww the last chapter almost made me cry and yay a sequel! nice story :D

I have faith in another sequel... its the age of the sequel anyways unfortunately haha. More Reaver though and I do anything haha

You've slaughtered me! God, you just killed me with the last chapter and epilogue, they were so good. I am now begrudgingly awaiting the sequel to this with a pout. :D

Yay it's sequel time! A baby? Oh dear, I like where this is going :D Hope the next story is up soon (Reaver returns, yas!) but I won't rush you. Who am I kidding, I will so rush you :P

Hope to see more soon! Again, I LOVED the story.

Emma x