| Reviews for Burdens of the Soul |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 2/17/2016 OMG! Please please please I'm begging you! Continue and complete this! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2015 OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE AND FINISH THIS! Amazing story! Ill be looking forward to updates |
| Shadowasexybeast chapter 4 . 4/7/2015 Are you still continuing this story? |
| Ca chapter 4 . 8/4/2013 Please update the chapter, please I'm begging you YY I've loved this story since you first published it and it's killing me that you didn't continue it. Please please pleasssse post more of this I'ver re read it a million times and every time it still makes my heart break for Vegeta. This is really a brilliant story please don't give up on it. |
 HardCider chapter 4 . 7/21/2013 Please update soon |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/2/2012 Oh you tease! You just had to stop there! Cliffhangers are evil... Great story, hope there'd be more updates :) |
| SakuraGirl25 chapter 4 . 9/24/2011 I am loving this fic! R u going to finish it or update? |
| cara9001 chapter 3 . 8/15/2011 For chapter five you could have Vegeta tell Piccolo that Frieza had raped him and he was pregnant with his child when he was young so he knows what the birth will be like and everything. But Frieza killed the baby after the first few days of it living. Maybe they could have kept it a secret or Frieza just wanted to see what the baby would look like and then killed it because he didn't care. I think something like that would be really good. |
| cara9001 chapter 2 . 8/15/2011 one of my favorite chapters because Vegeta shows some emotion I love it |
| cara9001 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011 God I love this story I'm reading it again when's the next chapter going to be up |
| cara9001 chapter 4 . 7/5/2011 i love this story soooo much please update i know you haven't for a while but this story is so good you can't give up on it so please keep writing on this story i love ite and would like to read more ) |
| SamuraiTater chapter 4 . 4/11/2011 This is, so far, a really interesting story. You have gotten my full attention within a few short chapters. I have read one or two other stories with Pic/Veg thing going but I like the way you have this set up. Hope to see more in the future. |
| AkatsukiSoRules chapter 4 . 3/10/2011 I really like this story so far! I can see the potential! Are you gonna continue it? (: |
| Artemis Diana Bellatrix Riddle chapter 2 . 3/6/2011 Great story so far. I just have one question. Are Piccolo and Vegeta going to fall in love? |
| Artemis Diana Bellatrix Riddle chapter 1 . 3/6/2011 Wow... I did not I see that coming. Goku RAPED Vegeta! That is weird. However, this is a great story so far. I cannot wait to see how it turns out. P.S. I will be changing my penname to Clarinet Daimao. I am telling you this so that in the future, when I review your stories, you will know that it is me. |
