God, the very last scene made me cry. Wonderfully done sequel to an amazing and unique story.

I really enjoy this story and it’s predecessor too, but I’m a little confused or maybe I found a plot inconsistency? A few chapters ago you had Pansy expelled and her wand snapped for using an unforgivable curse on Hermione or at least trying to and was taken to the Ministry to await trial. When was she allowed to return to school and to get another wand? Shouldn’t she be in Azkaban?

Truly lovely

What a beautiful story, really enjoyed it!

so this is actually my second time reading this and i cannot believe i didnt leave a comment...must have been too caught up in the story. i jusy wanted to say Minerva punching is soo one of my fave scenes like he totes deserved that and he should be scared. i would have never asked a pregnant friend of mine to risk her life. he didnt just ask her to risk her life tho but she would have risked hers, the babys, and minervas life like no. also, thats super sexy of minerva to do and so out of her headmistress duties that is just soo amazing. it was also humorous to see how minerva acted as hermione like transfiguring her wand and then being cocky about it.

K

Great story! Really enjoyed it. A story about their little girl would be great

This was great. Nice job

What a great story and ending...

Great story! :) keep up the good work

Thanks for this story! glad it brought you a happy ending along with Hermione.

Great story and awesome ending. I like how you took the premise of the story and changed up the details a bit. I am sure if you decided to continue the story on, there would be tons of interest.

That was awesome. The way you intertwined the deathy hallows with your story it was perfectly plausible, definitely think the original should of been this storyline!

New to the potter fandom and I just came across your stories and really enjoyed reading them. Thanks for sharing your imagination. :-) hollyhwrites

Loved absolutely everything about these 2 stories. Your writing style, the romance, the action. Keep it up! Also going to read all your stories now.