Reviews for The Greater Good
nikkiRA chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I have so much love for Haymitch. Great story, short and sweet.
Enleft chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
aw, haymitch. :[ its true, he always tries to do whats best for the reater good. good job.
My Dying heart chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
i love Peeta too i really hope he doesn't die:( Amazing one-shot i really love it:)
gethsemane342 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Nice idea. It's an interesting thought, what Haymitch was thinking, and i like how he sees Peeta and Katniss as his kids.

Concrit: You switched tense near the beginning - She’ll be furious, he knew. Shouldn't it be 'he knows'?

Good job.

Keep on writing.

Geth342
Obversa chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Hmm...good so far.

I have a suggestion: why not have Haymitch reflect on Maysilee Donner, the other tribute from District 12 that was his partner in his Hunger Games?

(I have a sneaking suspicion that Haymitch was in love with Maysilee before she died, much like Peeta is with Katniss, and that is how he came up with the idea to have Peeta annoucne he was in love with Katniss in the seventy-fourth Hunger Games...and well as why he drinks so much, to forget.)

Ex. there is some proof... after they announce the Quarter Quell in Catching Fire, there is a part where Katniss sees Haymitch's eyes fill with "pain" over some distant memory. Maybe recalling Maysilee's sacrifice so that he could win his Games and how Katniss wants to similarily sacrifice herself for Peeta?

Anyways, nice work!