That is beautiful! ;-)...

I did like it! It was really easy to follow, don't you worry guurl. Favorite for you!

gr8 story i can see y it won it totally captures sallys emotions

Sally's always been one of my favorite characters. I wish she was in the books more. I loved how you showed her thoughts. Great job!

Kind Regards,~ Gg

Oh, I loved this so much. Beautiful and poignant, perfectly in character for Sally. Favorited.

this was really good. in the series they never really talk about Percy's childhood, it all about what happens form age twelve and up I am just curious as to how he was raised and what not, it's wonderfully written, great storyline I really did like it

very cute, touching and well written! loved it

it makes perfect sense! sally is happy and sad, and she doesn't want to lose percy.

I really loved how it was written, I could almost feel the bittersweet happiness myself.

That was great and don't worry! It wasn't confusing at all!

It was a bit confusing, but I understood it perfectly. If that makes sense at all. Kind of like the story. (: This was really good and well written. Awesome job.

Beautifully written, and you focused on one of my favourite PJO characters.

Musafreen

this was sweet! there aren't many stories from sally's pov, and i think you got her perfectly :) thanks for a good story :)

That was gorgeous :) Meant to review earlier, but I didn't get a chance to. I love Sally's point of view of Percy, and the emotions were...well, undescribable. Little Percy is so cute. ;) The non-dialouge text makes things all the better too. Keep up the good work, and congrats. :)

-YoungDreamer

Aawhh! that was cute and wonderfully written (:

xoxo

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