oh you sonofamuk hell of a cliffhanger you left us at I'm dying to know what happens next

So, two things. I noticed that when you had the name for the Yellow Flash in Japanese, it was Kiroi Senkou. It's a bit nitpicky of me but when translating Japanese into the roman alphabet, it would be kiiroi.

The second thing was Minato wearing swimming trunks to the onsen. So, in Japan, wearing something in onsen is about as wrong as wearing your birthday suit to a public swimming pool. Of course, this is your world and if wearing something to onsen there are the rules, that's completely understandable. I hope I don't come off as rude, I just wanted to leave the information here.

I absolutely loved this story, just like the other two I've read so far, and the way the Pokemon show their personalities is wonderful. I especially loved the part where Demon went to find Naruto in this last chapter and how wrong it felt when Naruto pushed him away. Thank you so much for writing this.

It's not all going to go horribly badly in the Forest of Death, is it? It need to get to happy-fluffy-family-time moment in years future!

Well, I don't see why they are all blaming Kushina? They were both pretty young and apparently had a crappy relationship (with zero communications and avoidance/denial of conflict)... and he apparently had no issue taking a phone number from a flirty girl he "wasn't interested in", probably making Kushina more uncertain that they even had the kind of relationship that could be needed to become a family... so she made the best decision for her at the time (while unstable on all those pregnancy hormones)... the lack of communication between them certainly didn't really offer her any avenue to contact him without it turning into some kind of argument that would crash the life she worked so hard built for herself! So yes, there where both at fault (not just her!) and there's no reason to continually drag back the past into in (if they want to get somewhere) as they're both adults now.

I am really, really enjoying the many fic you have in this 'verse. I'm so glad you didn't stick with just the one-shot.

Remember how, oh, two hours ago, I mentioned bawling like a baby? Yeah. That's me. This is perfect and amazing and GAH.

If I were a cartoon character, I've have hearts in my eyes right now. This short story gave me quite a toothache, but definitely quelled some of my sweet tooth for family reunion plot. Love these kinds of stories!

Nice job - to the favorites shelf it goes :)

AWW! What a cute story! I hope theres more to this

I've probably said this loades of times, but this series is the aple of your creation. THIS is where you take Naruto and Pokèmon and makes them your own. This series have spaned a staggering number of stories, and they never seem to grow old or stale. Even your unfinished work is littered with tibits, twists and curious plot devices that it is impossible to really put it down or stop reading.

It probably have something to do with your mastery of the content, seeing as how much you play the games (btw, I am deeply sorry to hear about your game). Neither does it matter that you make up your own little twists on the story of Naruto as you go along. It is actually one of your most impressive features as a teller of fan fiction. To be able to give us something familiar in such a way that it becomes brand new. Even your OC's are interesting and enI kdering. A statement to how good you have become.

True, you play off our emotion as if you were fooling around with a Yoyo, but we really love you for that. I cannot stress enough how much I wish you to start tapping away at a keyboard again, to give us more of this wonderful series. You are the reason I still play Pokèmon games, in my 20's, and keep loving every second of it.

I know the initial drama have about faded here, with the reunion of the family, but seeing how early it still is in the story, I think you will with little effort be able to press on to make even greater stories further up. As far as we have come, and as far as I'm soon to be once more (when I get further up the plot of these stories), you've started to involve Kushina's family again. Not to forget the journalistic twist you set on it, but have yet to complete.

What I'd really would wish to see, is how you'd play it form there. Course, I'm sitting here with an impression on how you'd do it. I've got all these ideas about this and that, that I'd want to see happen. But I'm not going to suggest any of it. Mostly, because you probably put those pictures there in the first place, but also partially because I'd want to see you do your own thing, like you always do.

Well, here is my humble praise to you as a fan fiction writer. Not doing you the least bit of justice.

Thank you.

Sigh...they always get seperated. _ and somehow miraculously meet up again someplace else.

Onto the next stroy.

And good job. This is also one of my fav's from you. ;)

A cute little puppy?

Lololol

GOing on.

(Yes, I am ust reviewing for the heck of it! ;D)

I kinda feel sorry for Spooky. _ _

But in any case, good chapter, moving on now...

One thing I don't like is overly-Jerkish Sasukes...but I guess you fix that later on; so...yeah. Poor naruto. What a shock.

I feel sorry for Kushina here. o_O

I didn't get the dream sequence the first time, but I do now. :p