Nice!

This is absolutely perfect :) Brilliant job capturing their personalities

Wow... You got their personalities right I'll give you that! It sounds like poetry but doesn't look like poetry. I think if the two conversed and taught the other how to be fire or water they could be one hell of a team! I like the poem/story!
(I felt like you needed a review, about 5 years and only 7 reviews means that they're at a loss of words from the brilliance or people haven't read it.. Which they should!)
Bye! :D :) :P

not sure anger is foreign to him... But I do like the thought that they balance each other out.

That was sweet and simple without being sick. Way to go, a very nice job.

Great viggie. Perfectly characterized too, the fire and water metaphors fit the two of them perfectly. I love the simplicity but poignancy of this piece. The only thing that I notice was that Leia's bit was a line short - in order to balance the two out, maybe another line about fire would be good to add.

Beautiful! That is so completely them! Great use of the imagery conveying their personalities. Wonderful job! :)

:O What a good way of looking at them! I can totally see them saying that about each other-good job!

Wow, it's very interesting. I love fire-and-water comparisons, and it's fitting. :)

-Wings

Good job! A nice look into the contrasts between Luke and his sister, and an accurate portrayal of both of them.