| Reviews for Noonvale |
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Wolf heart 22 chapter 2 . 2/22 Please update soon. |
CasterWay chapter 2 . 2/5 A decade-long wait worth it. It’s kinda hard to imagine Martin the Warrior going on one last adventure, but here it is, I suppose. There is always a first and a last. All indication points to him returning to Noonvale to face Sorno. A pyromaniac fox? That’s a nice idea, to be honest. It would be nice to see a bit more of backstory, but I digress. Gonff is as Gonff-like as ever, though I think he would have more than one son by now. And Martin... he’s older and wiser, but I suppose he has a MASSIVE void to fill later in the story. In any case, thanks for updating after so long, and may your heart be your guiding key! |
warrior4 chapter 2 . 2/4 Great to see an update here. Your villain is quite wicked. Good job setting him up like that. The feast at Redwall was a delight to read. Gotta love a good Redwall feast. Then there's the dream. Quite the call to action. So, does Martin draw his sword for one last quest? What happens when/if he returns to Noonvale? All great questions. Hopefully we get an update sometime soon to start getting some answers. |
Tarica chapter 1 . 9/5/2010 I do hope you plan to continue this. It's very well written, I particularly like Martin's insights on his past and present. I would love to see how he decides to travel to Noonvale. Will Gonff accompany him? I just can't picture those two being separated by anything but death. |
Redwallfreak108 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010 good chapter! can't wait to read more! so plex update soon! |
LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 9/13/2009 OH well done! |
warrior4 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 Well I'll admit I was at first hesitant to click on this story and see what it's about. However much to my surprise this is actually pretty good. I'm thining that there is a heavy Joker (as in from Batman, Joker) influance on your young fox here. But that could work well. Nicely done on setting up the scene at Redwall too. You gave us the timeframe and insights to Martin's mind very well. So this could actually prove quite interesting. |