I agree with the other reviewers. This is indeed a heartwarming and adorable mini-oneshot. This pair of sisters certainly deserve happiness after all the grief they have suffered due to the callousness of their father - something no children should have to go through. Thanks for sharing this story with us!

This was absolutely adorable!

For a fluffy one-shot, I felt that you really got both Rin's and Sakura's characters perfectly well.

Cute story, but Sakura isn't nearly that uneducated. She did chastise Shirou on how he opened his magic circuits.

But t'was a nice little tale of bonding.

I giggled. Repeatedly. Shirou isn't the only one around here who fails. And it's good to see them getting along post-Heaven's Feel, even if Rin does want to beat her head into something.