This is great! I hope you eventually get back around to adding more chapters.

"Glorious" was my favorite, but this chapter was really good, too. Insights into their characters.

LOL!

Mustard on hot dogs? Sacrilege :-D

Also may I compliment you on your correct spelling of the word "complement".

Wow, this is incredibly random but very adorable! Nice job!

LJ

Mustard on hotdogs - "I never realized people ate that many pigs... and insects"

Very cute (even coming from someone who acutely reacts to the mustand by sweating and getting ill from it)

Nice job!

LJ

I love lizards too, the little kind - and I think they're cute. ;) "Beastboy said..." it's nice to see BB as someone giving the information for once. :)

XD Heh, just like Star to think something like that.

But mustard with steak is actually ok...; (it's not with ice cream though!)

Divine substance...XD

Very good. Congratulations. And please, do it. I'd love to read more of it, especially if it involves Terra.

Wow, this is a cool piece..I feel a connection between "underhand" and "underhanded", something relating to her betrayal perhaps? Terra's obsession with control and secrecy was a nice touch as well, it was completely Terra. :) Hope you update Confiscated soon too!

I really liked that. It's the same thing with me and X-country. I like that it's a sport of will and determination instead of talent. The harder and farther you run in practice, the lower your time will be in a race. It's so simple and easy to gage your improvement. Reading this one-shot reminded me of that. Thank you.