| Reviews for Beach Day |
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Plasma57 chapter 2 . 3/27/2014 Pretty please make a sequel to this real soon! |
Crimson Tainted Sin chapter 2 . 12/31/2012 Sweet and adorable story, great job(: although I found the beginning to be a tad too long and found chpt 1 too draggy. |
washiwashimurder chapter 2 . 7/5/2012 ! i used to think specialshipping was cute, but this totally blew me away! dont get me wrong, i still like redxyellow but silverxyellow is ADORABLE! this story is soo awesome, how in-character everyone was and how you described feelings very well. it was funny too! :3 mmm wait isnt yellow 1 yr older than silver? oh who cares :D oooh i went fangirl crazy! i love the dex holder guys so much...im happy they arent muscle men i like slimmer tall guys better(weird..) hehe well again awesome story GO VIRIDIANSHIPPING! \('•)/* |
afsalkj chapter 2 . 8/9/2011 I LOVE THIS! |
a random reader chapter 2 . 4/21/2011 nice story, yes, yes, it's very nice. you make Silver character really like 'real for real' it's kinda hard to explain actually. and that goes not only for Silver but also the others. too bad the luckyshipping moment are kinda short. to me personally, it would really be nice if you expand their moment together. i challenge you to make more of luckyshipping and if possible burningleafshipping story. show me if you are a true genius. ;D i really looking forward to read more about your story. i hope you never runs out of ideas. |
silverluver4ever chapter 1 . 2/22/2011 That was REALLY 1st viridianshipping story i've r not the only 1 who knows next 2 nothin on yellow'spowers...I don't even know her eye colors change alot in the manga. I can just imagine silver blushing...IT'S SOOOOOOOOO CUTE! SILVERLUVER4EVER! |
J1hbk chapter 2 . 10/12/2010 It's the opposite of what you were expecting. I'm not too fond of the shipping, but I LOVED the story. xD |
MichaelaTheUchiha chapter 2 . 7/25/2010 I liked this story, even though, as you probably know but you might have forgotten, I'm a huge Special Shipper fan and really thinks that Yellow belongs with Red, but it was a nice little Viridian Shipping story and I just liked it. ...Hi~! |
sneezel chapter 1 . 4/23/2010 I particularly liked how you portrayed Gold and Silver, as in them conversing together...I actually loled at some parts. I think you captured Gold's character very well! :D |
ThistlewickTheGhost chapter 2 . 2/28/2010 Amazing Story. Love The Nickel Bit, Very Funny. Don't Really Care About ANY Pairing, But You Made Me Care About S/Y. That Takes A Good Writer. |
Cheryl chapter 2 . 12/26/2009 The story's good. Can you submit how Silver and Yellow's date went? |
specialshipping 4ever chapter 2 . 11/15/2009 Not bad. & i'm sure both of them enjoyed their first kiss. But why doesn't Silver & Yellow kiss like in Silver's first daydream. I kinda like his first daydream. And 2 think that it really was real. |
specialshipping 4ever chapter 1 . 11/15/2009 Its my first ViridianShipping fic i've ever read. I'm starting to feel sorry 4 Silver. So, i thought i could get use 2 ViridianShipping. Unfortunately. i was right. Keep going with it. & by the way, I couldn't imagine how Yellow is in her slim black bikini. Could u? |
Zephyr Souls chapter 2 . 11/8/2009 I haven't had the chance to read this chapter yet, but the beginning mesh of everything cracked me up. XD |
StripesGoDown chapter 2 . 11/4/2009 Wow, this is simply gold. Is it me or am I going to favourite all of your stories? x6 I like this one, especially the part where Blue finds out Silver and Yellow are french kissing. *giggles* ~“Well then, why are they kissing?” Red asked. “Why are they kis-, wha?” Silver had broken his own heart and depressed himself, and Yellow bawled her eyes out thinking Silver hated her. And now they were kissing? About five minutes later? It wasn’t easy for Blue to believe. Red pointed towards the beach and due to the idea of her best friends kissing and her generally curious nature, she walked a few steps over to investigate. “Red, what are you talking abou- Oh my godnes!” He tone got higher with each of those three elongated words, and a wide smile formed on her face at “goodness”. ~ Makes me think that Red isn't so clueless, and he's aware of his surroundings. (But others MIGHT disagree D:) Cute. Maybe fangirl squeal worthy. I'm hoping for more ViridianShippyness. :D ~NyaniHenshi |