God I love this chapter XD It's perfect. So sad, true and eerily comforting. Mello's so young when he leaves to go live alone - it'd really fuck up his hea,d even more so than always being second would.

Really well written xxxxx

Hello! It has been so long since I've been around, do you remember me? Came across your story again in my favorites, and this last little chapter is specifically great :)The ending line kills me.

Wow. I don't know why, but I really really (really really really) like this.

Oh my goodness, I missed you 3

I really like the closeness of it despite the fact that it's Mello-centric but in a way, more Near-focused. If that makes sense. It's like you're demonstrating that it can be about Mello without being overtly about Mello. (Wow, that's confusing.) A-A-And the part about his soul in a suitcase. You could write Fall Out Boy songs, you know that?

Oh, and Mayday Parade~~~ :D

excellent drabbles :D

USB ports are very sexy.

Despite the Lady Gaga lyrics, I love it like always

I spy the alliteration again :D I was getting worried that the tap was malfunctioning, but it has returned at full strength. They're so cute in this little Accountantland; I love the wit in the diaglogue, in the first part too.

And I enjoy the fact that Matt licks Mello. Just FYI XD

That was so... cute! Compared to the rest of these, well, it was like night and day. (And that's a very good thing, methinks, because change of pace is always good. Also, it let's me know that I can expect great things from you, no matter what style you've decided to write in. ;D )

-Eggy

I have a very random question to ask you: what do people usually notice most about your writing? Because I swear, the words are literally jumping up off the screen at me, and I can't even pinpoint exactly which lovely little abyss they're coming from. Your description was gorgeous, as was your sentence-structure. (Yes, I notice things like sentence structure.) So tell me, my dear, because I'd love to know! Keep up the brilliant work!

-Eggy

Fucking fanatastic. I swear, each one of these is better than the one before it - they're brilliant.

I adored the vomiting thing (haven't said THAT before...), it was very unique and new and wow.

Crap Review.

I like the quote you pu at the beginning.

Thank you :D I wuv you so much~~~ -glomps-

You sent me part of this one ages ago. And I love it. That little 'that's the sad thing' that's repeated has to be my favorite the 'metaphorical dirty hands' and that after all this he's still doing the things Near wouldn't. And 'endless blue skies and endless blue eyes.' And he's taking out the grenades and taking out the pins and taking -himself- out as thought that will helps something because it's all he can think to do. It feels like he's changing and he knows he's changing and that makes him sad and angry but there's nothing he can do but realize what's right in front of him.

And I'm done rambling ;

Gah! You're killing me. You're killing me with your words and the way you can twist my emmotions around with just a single sentence. It's not fair how utterly amazing you are. People shouldn't be that amazing. Damn you. (But not really, because then you couldn't write us any more lovely drabbles.) So, uh, in case you didn't get it the first time, I loved them. All of them. And now that I've made myself seem like a crazy stalking psycho, I'm just gonna give you this plate of cookies here and run away. *Hands cookies.*

Huggles!

-Eggy

Since I would most certainly get annoying rambling about every chapter, lol, I figured I'd review the one I liked best. :) They're all amazing, but this one, this one is /really/ amazing. And not just because it's smutty. XD

No, see, the ambiguity of the kind-of-smut is what makes it so beautiful. And intense. The sentence about the line between pain and pleasure blurring was just perfect.

Never stop writing; you have so much talent. C:

Aww, that was so cuuute 3 I love it! Well, I always do. But this one's my favorite so far :D