One of my absolute favorite Lily/James fanfics! I would love for you to continue

If you ignore the over dramatic style and what I think is a poor representation of the Potter parents, this is a good story.

I loved every single one of these great job!

I really liked your story!
I am sad because there is no more chapters..

I loved all of these. :) but my favorites were probably chapters 5,8, and 7. :)

Awesome best ever Jily

So far I am finding the reactions and emotions are more dramatic and angsty than the situation warrants. Their relationship is far from healthy, with his controlling and albeit violent behaviour, her desperation and fear of him.

Honestly, my absolute favorite Lily/James fanfic. Your story is raw with emotion, and I never get tired of reading it! I would love to see more.

To be honest, the lack of chronological order in the chapters of Tempestuous made me pay even more attention to your wonderful, raw and honest characterizations of James and Lily. I wasn't too fond of James' possessiveness and control at the start but this portrayal of their characters and their social circumstances truly make everything solid and meaningful! It doesn't leave Jily in the sweet, happily-ever-after (until they die) state most people do. It convince readersders how troubling and precious their relationships are to them. And it make readers like me wish for a relationship with as high a stake as theirs. :P Thank you so much for these snapshots abduction a glimpse of their full pictare! I have no idea if Tempestuous will very continued but know that you have made a deep piece of work in uncovering their relatioship!

God these two are so passionate. Loved it.
I hope one day you will finish this story. Even if you don't I still love it and I will probably read it again and again and again. :)
Thanks

Kate
Xoxoxo

Please, don't tell me that it's over ... no, really, don,t you even dare to tell me that this FF is over. Do you just imagine ow much difficult it si to find a good story, so well written, so inspiring and exciting where characters are actually 'in character' and not traspositions of god knows what. If it's true that at Christmas we're all good, please update a new chapter :) (obviously sonner, the better).
P.S. If, for having a new chapter ,do you want me to write a review forma every single chapter, analysing the aspects that I liked or things like that I'm in. Just let m know and I start writing, but, please, update !

Perfect jily is perfect

Omg this is my favourite fanficThat was cute I would like something to happen to lily and then fir James to save her typical be always wanted that in a fanfic

Yes I believe every girl will walk away with a smile after hearing a guy say that and mean it.

Please Please update even though I see you haven't updated for like 3 years :S But I really love this story and your writing so :)