PlPlease update really really really soon!

I. Enjoyed please update

I really love this story! I hope you come back to it and add lots more!

Love the idea! Great chapter!

are you going to finish this i like it and more heart attacks for frank please

Great to see a new chapter of this story. I love the way you described the house - real pretty :-) I can just imagine them chosing to live somewhere like that. Nice touch with Hawkeye's daughter wearing his old army jacket and I would love to smell his cologne as well ;)

I guess in the universe of your story Sherman Potter didn't go to work at a Veterans Hospital with Klinger and Father Mulcahy as shown in AfterMASH.

My favourite chapter so far - I absolutely love this! It still seems that Hawkey should have a daughter who seems so in to military stuff though.

"Little Hawkeye" I like that and no I would want to get Doctor Pierce mad either.

It does seem strange that Hawkeye should have such a military minded daughter - liked the way you portrayed Howitzer.

LOL - I could just see the expression on Frank's face :-D Yes they would make a wonderful foursome.

I love it! I love it! This is really really great. I hope Hawk and Margaret marry, they belong together, and the kids are wonderful.

I hope Margaret thaws out enough (no pun intended :-) ) to start calling Hawkeye by his first name instead of calling him 'Pierce' all the time.

Can't wait to see what happens between the two of them or what other plans Estelle and Dylan have to get them together.

This is a great story and really good for your first MASH fic. I love the way you are telling the story mainly from Estelle's perspective and she is just as I would have expected a daughter of Hawkeye's to be. I have read four chapters so far and will review them as well. Please do not take this story down. Once small thing though - there were a few mistakes as in "Shudders" instead of "Shutters" around Hawkeye's house. Don't worry, we all make 'em and I thought it was funny but just make sure to doube check everything before you post. I know it is a pain but it shuts the picky people like me up . LOL

I like this. Estelle's really likable. Keep up the good work.