Wow this is...wow!In a good way!Please update soon ok?

I actually was sad in this chapter, poor Sora & Roxas. I hope to see Axel/Lea in one of the later chapters so that he can kick mean Riku in the ass(Squall kicking Riku out of being a crazy is fine too). I actually never played the game with Xion so everything I know about her is fanfiction related but I thought Axel liked her.

Are you going to pick up this story again? BTW I love the Mako too~

please update soon!

Okay... Aside from Riku creeping me the hell out, this chapter was totally cute at the end! . LEA! I LOVE that name! But only because it's Axel's true name. (I know a Lee IRL, and he is NOTHING like Axel and thus not as cool. DX) Can't wait to see how the hell Cloud gets Saix to be his mate. XDD I don't know why, I feel like I'm gonna be laughing my ass off.

O, very nice! I can't wait to see what happens when Cloud comes into the picture and meets Saix! I just adore Saix!

I hope that Saix isn't an easy catch, I would just love to see him give cloud a real run for his money! The more difficult he can be, especially if he keeps outwitting cloud, will be ever so THRILLING to say the least! * evil grin* I just love it when the guy doing the chasing has to work for his prize!

Also, I hope that we get to see Saix in his berserker mode at least once!

Is Cloud going to be troubled and kind of mean, like Riku in this one, or is he going to be more like Seph in " An Angel's Pride"? I kind of hope for the latter, cause its so nice when the nice guy has to work hard to get his bearer!

O well, whatever you decide I will be happy with! Just as long as you make as many chapters as you can, as soon as you can!

Feed the Fans!

i do hope that riku is going to be a good husband mainly since this is my favorite pairing...you don't really do a lot of Riku/Sora...it would be nice to have a chaptered story with them as the main pairing...either way you are awesome!good luck with your 382/2 walkthough

I love this story, but Ihave to wonder? Where did Saix come from? Is he going to be happy with Cloud, like Leon is with Seph, or upset like Sora?

I can't believe Riku. Why does Riku have to be mean. Awesome chapter. -

What's up with Riku? A bit on the lunatic side is he? I admit seeing the Roxas/Sora dialogue thing was a bit dizzying (is that even a real word?) but all in all I liked this new chapter. Liked Axel's name too. Seeya next time!

OMY...I'm crying my eyes out here. I think i might just kill Riku, the evil...Axel bashing...being mean to Roxy...Abuse...I could kill him, stupid stupid! It was amazing, i loved the bits of akuroku in it anf i want more of it...I would love it if you atempted it again. On a diffremt happier note...baby Lea! i cant wait!

-Kaela

Aw... Riku's not so nice today... T_T

...TOTAL DOMINATION!

This was really good, I've been waiting and you didn't dissapoint! Did I spell that right?

And Saix was completely unexpected but then again expected, which doesn't make sense!

wow, Riku seems like such a prick... like he just wants Sora to have his babies not really care about him any more. He doesn't even seem to actually want to take care of him any more. I'm still curious who your putting Cloud with though. It was a really great addiction to the story. Please update soon.

Great chapter as always, felt bad for Sora thoug. I just noticed there's a Cloud/Saix chapter I cant wait. Saix is one of my favorite characters I'd love to see him in your stories. Please make chapter 5 come soon.

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! Poor Sora needs many cuddles from Leon and Axel needs to come back from the dead and kick Riku's ass. Chaos should stay out of other people's lives and stop interfering. I love the split between Sora and Roxas and how they still keep themselves separate but together. I can not wait to read more!