| Reviews for Prime |
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Scheffinator chapter 1 . 7/31/2017 Will this story get a sequel? |
WolkaiserDrake chapter 1 . 2/23/2017 not bad |
Zak saturday 1 chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 More |
AinLinx chapter 1 . 7/3/2015 MORE THIS IS GREAT! |
yindragonkiba chapter 1 . 6/19/2015 Nice |
XxElementalStormxX chapter 1 . 10/10/2014 Is there another chapter |
PinkDeadlyDeath1 chapter 1 . 5/3/2014 Continue please!*Puppy Eye Of Doom* |
CorvoKuro chapter 1 . 2/22/2014 Wow, you just blew my mind. Thank you. |
Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 12/21/2013 this has the potental to be more then just a oneshot that it currently is |
DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 11/7/2012 I Love the way this story is writing, Hope you'll uploads the story soon; I want to know what happen next in the story. So please update the story ASAP. When will you continue this story? I want to know what will happen next in the story. |
happychick.niji chapter 1 . 9/2/2012 i dont meen to be mean but next time you write a story you might want to consider telling the reader whats happerning as i got very lost in your story and then found it difficult to undertamd, next time (and im saying this in a possitive way) you may want to consider writing in a simperler(wrong spelling-ooops) form of text. but i must say that if it is your first try... well done! .x.:) |
puma1sunfire chapter 1 . 11/4/2011 whoa! interesting one shot. |
Aiseki0Hikari chapter 1 . 4/25/2011 Aww this is good! Continue pls ! |
mako234 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 This is a very good story. Will there be more for it or something similar to it? |
Manga154 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010 "Humm…" the reader stops to think. "This story has an understandable plot, I was confused at first but now I think I understand." reader grabs his head and slams it into the wall. "What is going on in my life," reader continues to bash his head into the wall. "Too many good storys to read at once!" (keep up the good work;) |