I am not even a skip tracer and I *want* that car ...

yay dad)

Great story. Wished you would have finished it.

this is a great story I hate that you abandon it. I hope it wasn't because of some of the flamers on here. if you ever decide to continue it I would love to read the ending.

I hate to have read that you fell out of love with the story :( . I'm just now finding it and truly enjoyed every word. You have a great deal of talent and hope that some day you find your passion again. I do think its one of those stories that if it had to end un-finished is the kind I can carry off to dreamland with me and play out myself. No current "mystery" involved to wonder how you were going to finish. I love watching Carlos and Stephanie growing together ... if you ever decide to come back, I'll be here waiting to read the rest :) .

PLEASE UPDATE I NEED MORE

Loved this story. Would love to read more but it is good so far.

Really loved it. Wish you hadnt lost interest

Love the story. Hope you write some more, but even if you don't get to it, this is wonderful. I can imagine things happening just this way after Ten.

Ummmm, okay so I just started reading this story and every time I try to read chapter 16 it won't pull up a random page pops up for a search. Is it just me or is it a mistake?

I just found this story and I love it, it is very well written and easy to read, can't wait to see where you go with this

Very amazing! I really hope you continue! :)

I'd really like to see you finish this. It's a good story and has potential. Like I said earlier, it feels like I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. You could have her train with the guys a little longer and then have a scene where Eugene Brown or the Ward guy find her at Point Pleasant. She can make it to the SUV and take off back to Trenton and push the panic button. Ranger and the Merry Men can intercept her and capture the bad guys. The 6 weeks in Miami could be a chapter. You could tell it from Stephanie's point of view so it glosses over all of her training. Maybe at first several of the men going through the course can make comments calling her a lightweight or something but through the 6 weeks they come to respect her. Maybe she could be instrumental in capturing someone. The reunion with Ranger (unless he goes with her to Miami for part of the time)could come at the end of the chapter about her training. Then her partnering with the new guy Ranger has in mind and how that works. Just ideas, hopefully something has sparked your muse so you can finish the story because it is a good one.

Can't help but feel I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. I really feel that Eugene Brown or Ward are going to come after her at some point.

Tinabelle,

Just caught up with this story and am thoroughly enjoying it. Hope you have more planned.

Lori