i took the dare XD and wasn't disappointed, thought my computer automatically placed it to Nancy, so it came out as a capital of someplace, had to fix the N to n...and somehow i already knew that -w- this is adorable btw!

"Bakura, what do you say?"

Did anyone honestly expect any other response than what Bakura then said? XD But seriously, this is a perfect little one-shot.

I... I looked it up. RYOUxBAKURA FOR FUCKING EVER!

A great story, I love how very different Yami and Yuugi really are.

Nancy...nancy.../searches it up on Dictionary dot com/ Ah ha!

Nancy:(n)

Used as a disparaging term for an effeminate man, especially a homosexual man.

O.o Uh huh...well, Bakura, I don't know about you, but I don't think you have a write to be saying that when you kissed your boyfriend about five seconds afterward.

Bakura: /twitch/

~Darkie

nancy: an offensive term for an effeminate or gay man

like your choice of words. i happen to like gay people so i would slap anybody that called anyone else this out of spite. they are just so rude don't you think? though in bakura's case i make an exception cause he never means the things he says.

loved the story though it was sweet though the way it was going i was almost certain they would end up in that abandoned lifeguard shed.

Love It

i liked this one, do you think you might do a full story based from it?

OMFG I LOVE YOU BABE._

I LOVE HAVING STUFF DEDICATED TO ME!

/vain.

very cute n sweet!

Well, it was interesting, to say the least. XD Nice job, this was fun. I love nacissistic Atem! Somehow it suits him...;-)

Nice! I loved it

This story is cool! Make some more puzzleshipping story again please!

hehe, that was awesome. :D *sigh* i need better adjectives, and i can't even spell it right... *sighs again*

um, anyway. i did like the way you switched the viewpoints like that, and i thought it was a little funny, how Atem (by the way, you masde him sound like gorgeous eye candy, and i thank you for that! ;D) was completely gay without reserve. i kinda wasn't expecting that, lol. but still it made for a nice touch. :D

all in all, it was really good, and i enjoyed it immensely. :D

That was good. I guess Yugi might have a better suffer than he thought. Great one!

An amusing one-shot. To be honest, the only thing I found to be unbelieveably OOC would, of course, be the last paragraph. The rest... I'm totally cool with. I could totally see Atem being narcissistic (as any Pharaoh would, of course, be). I was a little suprised at the BakuraRyou incest (that you made it incest, I mean), but not in a bad way.

Anyway, as I said, all in all, amusing. And original. Writing when one is tired either makes very bad stuff or very good stuff-I'd say this leans toward the 'very good'. Great job.

~Shadow of Undine

P.S. I think that I might have read too much fanfiction to find emo Yuugi OOC. Hmm.

Very lovely. Sorry...this is me again-same as Black Rose. Black Rose Dragon is my sister, and I accidentally used her name! My bad.

But great stuff. Watch the language-and you're fine!