I REALLY miss this book it meant so much to me I really loved it and I hope you can continue it please I understand if you don't want to or can't though so please think about

Aww I miss this story so much I was hooked on the new blood book and I hoped that this one was finished can you continue it please you obviously don't have to if you don't want to though just a request sorry if I wasted your time

Does anyone know who the four year old triplets are that Ryu almost recognises in chapter 8?

I really wish you'd come back to this story...
I've been reading your New Blood series for the last few weeks non-stop and i can't imaging going a day without it now. If I had your talent and even a little bit of imagination I would try and make the time to write a fanfic myself, but about *your* fanfic... It really made an impression on me.
P.S. I also really wish you'd write more about Tomoko and Yuu, I've been a fan of their relationship from the beginning :)
P.P.S. Honestly one of my favourite Naruto fanfics, and you've made a whole world of your own... I will never read another fanfic not wondering how your original characters would fit into it... If you're looking for a sign to pick up this story again, consider this short message it :)

Well, I'd been waiting for your Chronicles of Earths Defenders story to update and got bored so I picked up your Naruto fanfic. I just have to say that it is amazing. I'm kind of sad it doesn't have a real finale but the story has been a rollercoaster ride all on its own. I know you probably have no plans to return to this story after all this time, and I don't blame you. Everything that needed to be said has been said. But I do hope that you continue writing. you're at a 5 month hiatus on Chronicles and I can only hope you don't decide to give up on fanfiction altogether.

Skip... skip... skip...
You are great at building scenarios, but occasionally there needs to be something happening to make all that build up worthwhile?!

This story is so slow...

Updatee?

hello
i'm really happy to finally read the new chapter. i enjoy the apparition of what seems a new threat. a little disappointed to not read kyoko and kotaro on this chapter though and hope to see them in the next one.
keep writing
sunshine78

FINALLY

it was really weird reading this whole series again after such a long time. i've gotten a lot older and now i have more opinions and i've found more things to criticize than when i was younger haha. obviously i still enjoyed it a ton and it really brought back a lot of memories. i used to read this fic on my phone in middle school and now i'm in university. i just really wanna thank you for writing this series, like, this isn't a feat that just anyone could accomplish so i think you should really be proud of yourself for being such a great writer.

I know I already put one but I have a few years of reviews to catch up on. You did break my heart with some of those deaths but you can make it up to me with some Kyoko and Kotaro moments. Again so happy that this is back.

Imagine my surprise when I saw that Ols Souls had been updated. I can't tell you how great this is. Better yet, I can't believe how many characters managed to make it through. So happy that this series is still going on

This story is kind of creepy and extremely slow developing. I'm not sure whether or not I can hang with this one.

Not that you really care, but just thought I would give you some feedback...

Thanks for sharing

I've been thinking a lot about what to write in this review. I read new blood and old souls way back before your break and just recently discovered it was being updated again. I love this story and well while I don't love all characters (which is only human lol) I love how you write them.

I reread all of it before reading the new chapters and it was really fun to see how I've changed and what characters I liked now compared to back then. I found myself liking Kotaro and Kyoko a lot more than the first time I read it and Nao I liked a lot less than my first read through. It's interesting how you change over the years haha.

What I wanted to say really was that I'm happy you decided to finish this story because it's amazing and I always wanted to know how it would end. I also wanted to say that you shouldn't feel bad about the four year break because things happen in people's lives and that's okay.

Thank you for writing an inspiring and amazing story I can't express how much I love it! Can't wait to see what happens with all the characters before the end!