I've read and read and I'm still reading it and I'm not tired of it ... it fascinates me ... hopefully continue your other stories and make new ones ...

Can you please write a story on griffin...i bet that would be the most amazing story of your!

I am not a Jake and Nessie fan but both stories were beautiful. Especially this sequel.

plss do write a story on griffin...

Yay! Finished it all in a day! Great story! Gonna go read the next one!

I've read so many stories in the Jacob/renesmee world and your stories are definitely one of the best. I love how they're so detailed and graphic. The only thing that bothers me is that Jacob seems really out of character to me. In the twilight saga, he was always this happy go lucky kid but in your stories he just seems, frankly, like an asshole. I'm not sure if I like the way he treats Renesmee. I completely agree with Embry when he thinks that Jacob acts like everything Renesmee does is bc it's her duty. His attitude towards her really bothers me. Maybe it's the feminist in me, but I just wish their relationship was more balanced. He just seems to be dominating her all the time.

27.
Chapter 27.
Nessie
Here I Am but suddenly a Greatest RIP But I was in labor then the two suddenly Bit me but suddenly Save their Sibling then Alice foreseen this my Death the thirteen kids were Out Bit me Again born you guessed as Toddlers then it happened Motionless and She screamed then ran to get my own Grandfather the Children Aged differently then They had Venom bit her that myself then suddenly the Newspapers reported I had Finished my Transformation too Late with their own as well the Pack Crashed from the Corpses with the Best Friends had hybrids Followed with the kids with pets as well no more breeding then it was with a Worst headlind in Federation's history it Said MIR'S RENEESME BLACK COMPLETES TRANSFORMATION RISEN AS A TRU-BLOOD VAMPIRE SLAYING SUPER SAILOR GUARDIAN OF HER LATE LIFE FOUND ACCUSED IS MUDERED WITH THEM BY THE SENIOR VOLTURI GUARD KILLED THEM ALL WITNESSES AROUND THE WORLD! That I was Freed and with their Kids all of them burst outside with the Destroyed pack were breeders then took as all of the blood from as all of them but it was no more taken from America and Around the World I was infertile officially but the Volturi declared a True Sentence onto me and the Kids grown up with mates then Suddenly crashing with them but Freed of the bodies were more Around the World brought here to die then it happened Screams were heard as all of them the Condemned us to Exile Aboard to Vulcan were much many tribazillions as than more then it happened were more as all of them had time-Split places it happened NOVA! but Reincarnated differently but Lost the frozen bodies all brought that was it Death then all of their Children to their children's children and they bit and Made them like us/them from human women then into the Largest villas on Vulcan it happened we were Invisible but it happened to the as all of them with the Second ones all of the Humans then frozen as all of them from death turned them our new race were none at al both went Extinct by Vampires but It with ourselves Shattering freely with all Saved animals both with them violently Cracking freely then lost the Earth to the Volturi noticed how different I became fiercer loyal fearless lethal dangerous but Swiftest but fastest but Predatory but Deadly with weaponry yes very deadly I was no longer a newborn a Ancient they were so furious mess with the new and improve Reneesme Black I am a Vampire slayer very offically fully-Bitten as a Carrier to the Werewolf code stopped dying but lived Beyond forever then it came too late I was driven by Vengeance with them took over but Cracking outside But all of them lost the bodies but prepared to set my gun oh my god you look different so us Evolved Pack she is a Colonal United States space marine Food thank you but I am on a Strict milltary diet watch this Aunt Alice I have to eat like a Remelakan they are Extraterrestrials oh no Carlisle you test on our niece that I place my hoogie it happen ate more than more faster than normal the Pack noticed how different oh crap you ate like Connie Conehead she was born on Earth yes of your new DNA Trapped but with both fused No thank you I must be on this diet the Pack loved Coneheads oh god we had our last kids yes Momma mia we were watching a scifi movie Embry laughed louder it is too funniest that night the beds on the wall myself snapped out the light then Rachel Clonked her husband I was asleep but light had to look like her then morning came I wore my movie styled clothes wearing my apron on had to look from Coneheads did a Planetary study onto their race.

if continuous, thanks

I've really loved your stories! This was such a great sequel to your first. And the timeline and way you set out each chapter is very well thought out too. I like the characters you have developed and the world's also. And how La Push is progressing. And the relationships each person has with each other. And also the way you switch from each characters perspective without repeating what was just said. Can't wait to read your other stories. First I will check out liljen stories as they share the same timeline. Happy I came across this wonderful story.

A really great story. One of the best wolf story I've read. It became a little dragged out in the middle but I pulled through and the ending was thrilling. Good job!

Love this story. Can't wait to read Embry's story and all of the other ones. Thanks for writing this amazing fanfiction. Good luck on all your future endeavors. Keep up the great work.

I'm speechless this chapter was so powerful good job loved it

I loved reading this story.

Both your stories were amazing, with funny moments where i'd laugh and sad ones with tears in my eyes. I loved this story. It was beautiful and I really wish you could write more of Jacob/Renesmee stories because after reading these you'll just keep wanting more.

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HAPPY!
PERFECT ending for the story.