This was soooooo good! I loved it! I loved how you mirrored their actions with the phone calls - both picking up their cells to call the other at the same time - and also how you started and ended it with the phone call about not being able to sleep.

Lovely story, I really enjoyed it! Well done! )

I liked how you closed the case and progressed their relationship to the next level all in one chapter, very nicely done!

That was great loved it and how they got together at the end.

Maria

this is a sweet Fic

update?

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I love this story, and especially this ending. The slow build up, and the nice mellow quiet moment that is the conclusion. Absolutely masterful!

That was a great story and a really sweet ending! I loved it!

That was a great chapter! It was really funny, and jut wonderful overall! Off to read the last chapter!

I love this chapter! I really liked the line "“They just didn’t seem that enlightened” Charlie winked as his use of Zen brought an unintended smirk to her face. "

I love how you have Reese really coming out of her shell.

Off to read chapter 4!

Your truly write great stories! Nice to see "Life" living on in the world of fanfiction. Hope to see more stories soon!

Sweet ending. Thank you.

Sylvia

Phew, cold shower time. On to part 5!

Sylvia

Done too soon! Great though. Such a beautiful Charlie/Dani story set against the fire/case.

So enjoying this

Sylvia

And another great chapter. I like the tension between these two, no matter what it signifies.

Sylvia