please continue this story
it has me reading at the edge of my seat
i really want to know who the killer is

so mysterious

Hmm...how do I put this?...Your grammar is on and off; good and bad and the characters are so OOC! Seriously Lee a butcher? I can't even see Lee hilding a butcher knife chopping some raw meat. Tenten a maid? Hinata a housewife? Give the girls some dignity? Heck even Sasuke and Neji need some empathy! They're supposed to be prodigies! Not a desperate journalist and a model with no brains! Other than that pretty good plot! Although you should of spread the deaths out a bit, you're chappies are pretty short and a death every chapter is a little TOO repetitive. Still you're idea/plot is good! I miss detective stories! It's hard to find them nowadays. I also agree with troublesome stalker with your grammar problems.

please update soon! I really wanna know how it goes on. I really miss detective stories such as this, and this one's pretty good. Especially the romance between Shikamar and Temari! Love it!

love this story it is very interesting please update soon

Um... uh... How do I put this in a not offending way? Let's see... Dude, the grammar is like a broken stick. This means that, well, er, your grammar is good but then comes this bad grammar (ex. Shino's bio: 'Hide behind sunglasses', etc.) and then good then bad and so on and so forth! Please update though! A really good plot but broken grammar but write more chapters!

er... this is gonna get annoying. i wanna know who did it.. adn the people i really dont like as characters already died.. damn.. er... time to read more

amazing story keep it up !

hope u read reviews i dont want to do this for nothing.

tentens bioWas Hired via Internet by the new owner or does she really? change the does in the sentencd into a was to make it better (Was Hired via Internet by the new owner or was she really?) sounds better

i enjoy trying to help u so hurry with the next chapter so i can eventuall help point out spelling errors

temaris bio last part(Or is she here to make sure no one survive?) just add a S at the end to makes survivesurvives

shikamaru's bio at the last part. (Does the smartest man also is the madest?) sounds 5th gradish 2 me. to make it better (Is the smartest man also is the madest?) sounds better

the only thing i see wrong in sakuras bio is at the last part where it says (Does her knowledge of the Human Body could help her commit murder?) remove could out of there to make it sound better. (Does her knowledge of the Human Body help her commit murder?) see sounds better

nevermind bug in shinos bio should be changed into bugs lol forgot 1 hehe

yea im going to point out spelling errors 4 u if uv wondered. shinos bio last spelling error. it says hes been invite to the mansion for the bug collection. invite should be changed into invited.