Beautiful. Well written. Very characteristic for both of them.

Keep writing. You're good at it!

This is really depressing but also really good. I feel bad for Ianto. I like the symbolism you use with the kiss.

HOLY CRAP! This is awesome. I love how dazzlingly frightening this is for Ianto.

And this line:

"There is nothing he could do. Were Jack to strike, he would be utterly defenceless. Were Jack to run away, he would be naked and alone in the Hub. Were Jack to laugh, he would feel like a fool."

You've really hit the nail on the head. This was an absolute pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.

brilliant.

Ianto is a fool, but that is gorgeous. When is it set? I hope that they did get a clue eventually.

Gx

Ouch. Very well-written; good job capturing this side of them.

wow! it was so heartbreaking what Ianto thinks about kisses and its effects but also a big truth1 I really enjoyed this! thanks for sharing!

God that's depressing ( Beautiful though.

ooh.

that was amazing yet tragic.

very well written

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