What?! You are keeping me so intrigued!

Such a strong start! Chapter 1 has me hooked!

I got sent here from Chuck This blog, atcDave. Great story. So much better then season 3. The confident capable Chuck, Sarah at her bad assines and of course Veronica Mars were fun to read. The twists and turns to the plot were appreciated. Well done and thank you.

I loved this innovative cross over. I loved how Chuck faking his own death had brought out the ring agents. I loved how Veronica is an intersect too. I just loved this story can not wait for it to continue. Kudos on a great opening act.

Nice story here. I just found it, read it, and enjoyed it a great deal. I see a lot of room for a sequel, and although after 3 years I suspect one in unlikely, I am sure that there are other Chuck/Office/Mars fans out here who would love to see another story in this AU. Thanks for all you have written, and if muse strikes again, I'd be even more thankful.:)

Fun story. Shame Veronica was cut off so soon :(

Great story.

Fantastic story. Expertly written. The mystery and action was very Veronica Mars. I can't tell you if it was very Chuck, since I've never seen it (I always wanted to start watching it and never got around to it). Even without watching it, I found the characters and situations clear, with just enough explanation to make it not boring (with too much info) or unclear (with too little). I imagine it was the same with non-VM, Chuck-watching readers.

The cliffhangers at the ends of each chapter were masterful! You cut off each chapter at just the right spot.

Your author's notes were hilarious. I loved the "Give me liberty or give me Chuck" comment - you should be happy they gave you liberty...and not jail time! _~

At the very beginning, I feel like Veronica would've been a little more savvy when it came to the spy technology - and perhaps a little less surprised that Chuck wasn't actually dead. That's just a personal opinion, though. She always seemed to have the coolest PI gadgets.

In chapter 5, I feel like Logan would've held out a little more on giving up information on Veronica, much in the way Sarah was about Chuck. If he had been hiding out from the Russian Mafia - whether or not Sarah claimed to not be working for them - he would've been a little more careful I think.

Logan's last line in chapter 6 was so classic Logan, it made me giggle.

I loved Veronica talking to the video guy in chapter 7 - it was very in character for her.

In chapter 9, the exchange between Veronica and Chuck was fantastic. There was loads of tension AND humor, which is one of the reason I've always loved Veronica Mars.

At the beginning of chapter 10, the exchange between Logan and Veronica is just too cute for words. Later on, I highly enjoyed Sarah's interaction with the captured Reed.

The part about the Orioles made me all "gaw." My fiance holds out hope every year for the Orioles and we've taken road trips up to Camden Yards to support them even when there's no hope for them making it anywhere. I love that you included such a tiny detail in your story.

In conclusion - wonderful story. I look forward to reading Chuck vs. Dunder Mifflin!

Great ending to your story. I'm glad you wrapped up that plot line with Ellie too - she did need to know what had happened. I love the way you have written Chuck and Sarah and how they work together as a team. Thank you for posting this.

(And, I am really geeked for your sequel, because the Office is one of my faves!)

Now thats what I call an ending :) My boyfriend just got me hooked on office, I cant wait for the cross over. THIS IS WHERE I TELL YOU THAT I APPRECIATE THE 30,0 WORDS YOU PUT IN AND THE TIME YOU KEEP ME OCCUPIED UNTIL THE NEXT SEASON OF CHUCK:)

Great story...are you going to do a sequel? I imagine it could come out to be just as great.

Looking forward to more of your writing.

nice chapter, great story. thanks for the update. looking forward to your next work

Good work. Nice set-up for a sequel.

Okay, just finished up reading. I enjoyed the dynamic of the forced teammates throughout the fic. I think you did some cool stuff with the future of the Intersect. Action based stuff isn't generally my cup of tea (at least in writing...I'm more visual with liking action), but I still enjoyed this fic. Thanks for sharing!

nice chapter. Thanks for the story.