I cried so hard that I caught cold

_ this is so confusing can you please explain to me? i get that its like Light and L are ghosts that fade away? or something and light is watching over his family until they are gone...? but i dont get the ending or what happens

I adore this!
The writing is superb and it's so sad and touching.
Gah, there's really not much more I can say - just fantastic job!

T_T awww another sad one! I thought it was going to be a happy ending one. You know the one where L and Light meet, whereever the hell they are suppose to go after this, and they will be happy together! *pout*

but nonetheless, this one is still beautifully writen. i love it! _ again i am just amazed by the way how you write it. you didn't write too much. it was just perfect in the way how Light's feelings just come through in the story.

i just love and adore this line: "He only waited for the inevitable, knowing without knowing that here in this spot of secrecy he would meet his end as swiftly as L did before him." just beautifully written!

again i love it! although i am still hoping for a happy ending for L and Light! _

p.s. just letting you know that i changed my penname from Behan to TheEndofTag _v

i love this fic! its a bit confusing and sad at times [sad a lot of times] but so beautiful

That was absolutely beautiful...

Very moving. I liked the emotions in this.

Why doesn't L remember, I wonder?

loved it

Absolutely beautiful! i wanted to cry T.T

lovely, really really touching and very well written, both of them.

Awesome chapter2! Please write a third chapter!XDD

D':

so sad...

yay! another chapter!

i love the style of this story! and yes, you SHOULD add a third chapter! this story is amazing!

...I'm confused on what's happening...Could you clarify it for me a bit?

Is Light and L in Mu? They're spirits, and they fade away, forgetting their sense of selves?

Or are the being reincarnated (like the cycles you mentioned), but before they are reincarnated, they have to lose all their memories so that they don't bring the memories with them to their next life.

_ So confused.

~Isamu

It's true that it's not the most logical setting, but even Mark Twain is afraid of ghosts. I realy love all the decriptions of scenery. At first it was implied that L doesn't remember anything, but now there's proof that there's something left at the back of his mind. However, the way I see it is that Lighto gave both of them peace of mind. Would it hurt him to do something genuinely good for once? Well, I happy that L's content. And if I see a ghost as cute as L wondering around, I'll make sure to takle-hug him no matter whether I believe in ghosts or not X) Anyway, I'm realy happy you decided to continue it! Thank you and please keep up the awesome work!

It's a punishment I hope Light gets for the pain he inflicted on so many people. Karma bites in the ass, literally. I feel so bad for Sayu and Sachiko. Innocents harmed in a game they didn't even know they were playing.