by far, the best [one] piece of lemon fanfiction i’ve ever read. beautifully written, and i could feel the emotions of the characters through your words. as a fellow writer, i love when i come across gems like this. good job 3

Can't wait for more

Got back to this and I just wanna say I'm proud of you for being in the reylo community now

Why the fuck do i still love reading this chapter after all these years

The first story had me hot! Great work on this whole thing

Great this was awesome

I love your ZoNa stories!

Please do continue this series, I'm craving for more.

I will wait for future updates :)

Great story iloved it please write more zonami

P.S. Went to your profile to learn you've left:(

So sorry to hear that. I've never been on Archive of our own since I haven't really rad fanfiction until now...but I will surely like to read more of your work if you give me the ZoNa/Forbin:P

Thanks for all this work- still sad to see ya go (and because of censorship?! I mean, come on! This isn't some creepy case of using children or forcing people...your content is consensual [the only kind of sex people should have]! so cray )

I gotta say, I think this is my favorite chapter so far.

Bravo for these different scenarios. I never feel like the characters are far fetched or out of their element. I loved this chapter because Zoro is a virgin. Often, I find the females are delegated to be such or that both charcters had not so great firsts, so this was definitely fun to read.

One thing, Zoro is 21 (Nam is 20) after their 2 years apart, meaning he'd have to be 19 (Name, 18) before they separate so that just stuck out. But that is just a random whatever, cause I really like details...especially since Zoro has one eye after the 2 years and that's include din the fic, I get excited cause it makes it seem real.

Anyways, everything has been hella lemon but without bad writing and I love that you give such great sex but with true characters...so fun! Ugh, I love you. ktb.

P.S. Do you like Frobin? ZoNa is my OTP, but I love Frobin...they just seem like they would be the wiser, older couple that have such a perfect understanding while ZoNa is that brash and youth couple always fighting...but of course, always making up.

Anyways, that's all I had to say so far. You're awesome. Really glad I stumbled on this:DDDD

Please write more!

love these series of one shots :) !

this was hot! i liked how you included sanji in this even tho he wasn't really a part of the act haha

this is so sexy TT_TT

totally love this one shot here :D