Reviews for Watch the Sky
ArkieR chapter 3 . 8/1/2015
…No… Nonononononono! You can't just leave it there! This is too awesome and funny and adorable. It seemed to really be setting up for something truly spectacular. If there's any chance of continuing, I and so many others would be absolutely overjoyed!
ArrowSphere chapter 3 . 11/17/2012
Very excited to see this story up and running again! I will point out that there were still quite a few spelling/grammar issues throughtout the 3 chapters though despite the editing...

I'm really anxious to see how America and England deals with whatever Russia throws their way! I'll have to admit, it's been a while since I read a Hetalia fic, and I'm not entirely sure which superhero is who. I'm guessing that'll be cleared up as the story professes though. _
wolframeczek chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Oh God i going to really love this story.
Sam chapter 2 . 12/14/2010
I love this. It's really original and well-written. Hope to see more soon and thanks for updating.
mehcooky chapter 2 . 12/13/2010
Woot :D

I've thought that I'll never see the second chapter of this :O

I love your fanfiction

It's definitely one of the better ones 3

I'm really curious about the reasons as to why everybody hates on Ivan(again)

Looking forward to the next chapter

/delurk end/
MelodyOfStarshine chapter 2 . 12/13/2010
A very interesting story! Please update soon~
ravensandstars chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I love it, great start!
Trygg chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
so cute and exiting.. but America in a hero outfit (spandex?) so dorky XD.
Blank chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
...SO GOOD! I demand you update. Right now. RIGHT NOW!
dreamscape9000 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Very good start! It's always good to keep us readers intrigued by not explaining/stating everything but instead just showing (and of course, we found out England and America's relationship through their interaction). Plus, I like how you hinted England's desire for America as he unintentionally thinks dirty thoughts throughout the fic, which is much better than blatantly stating that he has a thing for America and allows us to sympathize. And, of course, the plot is original despite America being a hero and doesn't waste time with giving episodes of his heroics but immediately dives into the problem, which brings England and America together again (rather than random encounters/coincidence because it's England's choice to finally contact him to warn him). It's so much stronger when characters' choices create consequences, and I bet England's bitting the bullet by going behind the other detectives' backs... I hope to see that despite France's indifference towards work (which suits France so much) he will do something like, say, spy behind England's back (with Canada? and China?).

In short, definitely one of the better fanfics on with a lot of potential, which I shall be amiably stalking. :) Please continue!
Master of the Boot chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
I have to admitt it, my knowledge of Hetlia is almost null. Despite this, I'm falling head over heels for this story the way that Britain has fallen for America.

You've won me over to your side and I want more. I want to see all the cute romance and loving that's a trademark of this chapter. I want to see France molest Canada and Britian to work himself to the bone.

And that hero with the hood, is that actually Russia? I suppose I'll fine out.

Till then, this is your loyal man, Master of teh Boot and I say

Ta
kizunas chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
oh oh the first chapter sounds absolutely awesome alreadyy ffh fgf hf hero!alfred is just...too perfect !

Please do update soon 3
LaRequinne chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
This is a delightful read; It's most certainly different from all the others, and you pull my interest in!
Gluttonous Meirene chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
superheroes au! who. i find this very well written. :) i also this a little heartbreaking on england's part and this chapter (specifically, the last part) left me curious about the reasons why america decided to leave the police force (but i have an inkling. some of the people in the police force are jerks? as implied by that newspaper article).

and oh, the summary! now what would england do? :3 btw, i LIKED the last part. i feel that it's the best way to end this chapter: a short bit of backflash that somewhat answers (confirms that america was really a cop before and damn, the last line!) but ultimately burdens the readers with more questions (at least for me. but i'm a nosy person).

sorry if this didn't make any sense.
Blake Bishop chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
This seems like it's gonna be awesome! Alfred as a real superhero, it seems quite fitting. I feel awful bad for Canada, the poor thing. Anyway, I hope you update this~