I read “days were slipping past” years ago and it’s always stuck with me. it’s just been one of those fics that I always remember and wind up coming back to somehow, it just has that artistic quality about it that has the power to make you feel a certain way. so once again here I find myself back in this little universe you’ve created for these two, and it’s still just as fantastic as I remember it being the first time around. great job, you’re truly such an excellent writer. I know it’s been nearly a decade but if you ever find yourself drawn back to writing more Jalex, you’ll have at least one reader out there! truly best of the best for this fandom

I liked it!

That was so bloody brilliant! You captured the emotions perfectly, and I loved the tension and awkwardness between the two!

this is really good:) keep these coming, you're a great writer

3 you are poetic and your writing is beautiful

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I don't even watch WoWP but I love this story. I feel a bit sick for supporting incest but what can I say? It was beautiful!

So good. Words can't even express how amazing this is. It made my day seeing this in my inbox. Agh. Love it. I do wish that it extended- not multi-chapter- but at least ran through the later years. Still, the entire thing was beautiful. Great job.

Beautiful writing :)

I don't normally support incest, but Selena and David's chemistry onscreen make me wish that stupid ol' Disney didn't make them siblings! I mean, they kind of have this knack of choosing actors that have so much chemistry and put them as siblings. Blaahh. :P

Anyhoo, I really loved this, the way you wrote it was just perfect. :)

Write more soon. :)

come on they are brother and sister

incest is gross

very well written! good job!

Absolutely perfect as a one-shot! Well done.

Wow, I thought because I already knew how it'd end it wouldn't captivate me as much as the original story. Boy was I wrong! By the second paragraph I was pulled into this world all over again & it was just as good as the first story.

Amazing oneshot! I love love love how you write the Jalex relationship & hope you continue writing for this fandom. You are definetely one of the best authors we have in this community & eagerly await reading your Jalex stories.

You don't have to through the whole thing again...(actually you can because I would still read it) because just as it was ; was perfect...:)

this is very good :)

but for some reason i prefer Justin's POV

Amazing!

I loved it

:)

Great job Bye