| Reviews for The Girl Who Loved |
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Ashkan Dehno chapter 18 . 7/26 Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far |
Sterling-Ag chapter 1 . 3/12 The premise looks good. The writing for Harry and Ranma is spot on, but your Dumbledore is crap. I don't mind a manipulative Dumby. Heck a Dark Lord Dumby is fine to. But your Dumbledore is an over the top parody character that ruins believability and immersion. Your obvious hate for the character and immature manner in which you write him is sabotaging your own work. To bad, some of it seems promising. However you have to spend an inordinate amount of time getting "revenge" on a fictional character instead of writing in a more mature manner that would fit in better with the other parts of this chapter |
Korin Dragoon chapter 11 . 8/28/2019 The way things are going Harry could end up with a harem of Senshi and three witches, as well as two daughters, and one sex friend. |
Efloresco chapter 14 . 7/24/2019 This story is like a phoenix's song to me. In every sense of the comparison. That's how fucking beautiful it is, thank you for sharing it with us. |
Caprinae chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 Well... that escalated quickly. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/15/2019 love it/ but its also sooooo weird |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2019 i think the grandmaster is nuts |
FlamesOfTruth chapter 12 . 4/29/2019 I really enjoyed the scene in this chapter where Harry uses the scepter to slay the (creatures who will not be named to avoid spoilers). Very well done! |
FlamesOfTruth chapter 11 . 4/28/2019 Haha! Out of order! ROFL |
James Birdsong chapter 18 . 1/18/2019 Awesome |
jeanette9a chapter 1 . 11/28/2018 Something tells me Albus's plans are going to get pierced on a shiny moon rod. |
lamiahime chapter 1 . 9/23/2018 Seriously! Missus Harry Snape! Ewwww no poor Harry |
Axel Fones chapter 6 . 6/22/2018 Heroine on magic weed sounds hilarious. |
Axel Fones chapter 4 . 6/22/2018 Kek that exit by Setsuna. The gold digging slut comment made me laugh. |
Axel Fones chapter 3 . 6/21/2018 Ron asking the real questions lol |