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Very nice, I like the way you wrote this. It's rather disjointed, but I think that adds to the atmosphere of it.

Wow, that was lovely and atmospheric, and I think it really rings true. Toki is... well, he's messed up, and I think you show that here. He's nice and smiley and kind and says what people want to hear, but what parts of that are actually sincere is debatable.

In truth, a guy who always says what you want to hear is a kind of creepy concept, isn't it? Heh.