That was beautifully written. :)

very good :) soft and sweet :)

So sweet and touching, nice job.

:D I was going through fics for the up coming Jedi Apprentice Awards and just HAD to read this! It was amazing! Great job! Very great Job! :) You did wonderfully showing the emotions! IT WAS PERFECT! . I could totally see this happening! :3 Nice job!

Aww. So lovely and sweet, it brings tears to my eyes. Nicely done.

Ahh..very nice...very very nice...touching...it almost made my eyes tear up a little...and yes, he does have a smile that brightens a room doesn't he?...maybe a little mushy...but so what...I like mush as long as it isn't overdone and over emotional or gratuitious..and this wasn't..it fit them I thought.

Obi's Mom

Aw. This was beautiful. Nicely written.

Daw... That was so mushy sweet. I loved it.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. *wipes tears* Crap, I'm crying. That always happens when I read or watch something terribly sad, especially if what I am reading is as well written and characterized as this. Fantastic job.

Very nice story. It was the capture of a beautiful moment between Master and Padawan. And I found curious and funny that you published a story of Obi-Wan turning 24 on the exact day I turn 24, when I clicked on JA section and read the summary of your story I was really surprised , what a coincidence! -for me anyways, LOL-

Great one-shot! You accurately portrayed the bond that existed between the two of them, a difficult thing to do.

I love this idea, Qui-gon seemed so cruel in the movies, pulling away from the boy he had trained for years in favor of the percieved chosen one. I would like to think they had moments like these to ease the blow.