So adorable!

So freaking hot & cute all at the same time! Loved it!

Perfection.

Wow.
*giggles at last dialogue* xD

Loved the dialouge. It's so Ron and Hermione!

I think I'm in R/Hr heaven! That was just gorgeous!

Your Ron and Hermione voice was just achingly perfect. I loved how playful they were and how much they love each other. And I adored how Hermione was so eager to be with Ron and just her entire POV. Their wonder and awe and desire for each other was just oozing off the screen. Beautiful first time!

"Hermione had never been a fussy, frilly kind of girl. But she found as she stared up into his eyes and saw him looking back at her with such wonderment and desire, she found that she could absolutely be this woman." - This line is canon!

And Ronness should be a real word! There really isn't any other word to describe it, is there? ;)

Thanks for sharing this bit of R/Hr perfection :)

That was cute, sexy and funny :)... enjoyed the one shot thoroughly...

Excellent! Perfect amount of humor...Ron was hilarious, even Hermione's exasperation at the end was so very in-character.

I have to agree with the other, this is one of the best R/Hr first time story. Really true in character. And the "I was there too" line was hillarious. Thank you for writing it.

I have to agree with the other, this is one of the best R/Hr first time story. Really true in character. And the "I was there too" line was hillarious. Thank you for writing it.

This was perfect! Just the right amount of humor, exactly how their first time should be! Great job!

Too cute! what a perfect moment between them...when they shagged. HAHA!

Perfect. Beautifully written, honest, and hot!

"When you shagged me, yes. Honestly."

Again, perfect. Loved it!

Man, that was GREAT! Exactly what I would expect their first time to be like.

"I just shagged you."

"I know, Ron, I was there."

XD

Aw. That was quite lovely, and really well written :)