I like this one a lot - playful and fun!

She would kill him

Tee he he he maybe they will? ;)

Very well written, and kept a good amount of humor. In general not a huge fan of vamp Bella and Jacob, but you made it work without ignoring the smell and issues that they would have. I also have a hard time because I feel like Bella will just hurt Jacob again by staying with Edward, but I will choose to believe that she decided to stay with Jacob and they could somehow make it work long term.

Wow! It's really good!

I came across this. It's playful and fun. I like it a lot ! Jacob should have phased doing the doggie style, it would have been fun ;)

This was actually pretty good! :D It was the funniest lemon I've read. It made it an easy-going read which I appreciate, you never lost your touch, good job!

Loved It! :D

i loved this!

wow! that was an awesomely written jacob/bella lemon. if you keep going with this could you have something in it like edward finds them in the woods and has a total freakout. this whole story i was wondering where he was hiding. nice job at not using 'bad words' to get the point across. i did not see one and it was as awesome as a story that had them. -

HOTTTTTTTTTTTT!Amazing one shot!

Omg this is so good! Such humour mixed in with the hotness. Makes for an epic story man, good work D

Smebs

yum, you should make this more than a one shot3 I wanna see if Edwards angry, I want them to do this more...haha

Awesome :D

Okay, that was awesome. I usually don't like vamp Bella but this one was good. Hot and funny at the same time. Minus the angst which works for me cause he'll never get her back now.