cool make more chapters

Oh, poor Matt... ANyway, like story so far!

~Waveripple

I like the slowpoke _ hes so cute

XD she's a banette! I was hoping she'd be a froslass.

Are there real pokemon in this world?

Are the 3 Glameow Sister's going to were Red Yellow Blue scarf so you can tell them apart?

and I can wait for the next Chapter's

Name: Timotha “Timmy” Thomson

Age: 11 (Started her joinery a year late)

Pokemon already owned [considering that this trainer is going to try, and possibly succeed in catching these 'experiments']: First (and only) Pokemon: Burst the crazy over active Phanpy.

Hometown: Mahogany Town

Personality: Quiet and always calm—even when Burst and everyone isn’t. Not very bright when it comes to Pokemon. But very good at understanding feelings. And only captures Pokemon if they want to be caught. Does give a dang what people think about her.

Appearance [please include hair color, body structure, ect...]: Short, with long dark pink hair tied back in two ponytails that goes down to her waist. Not fat, but not super skinny. A little chubby. Most always wears a tight fitting black shirt with dark blue short leather sleeveless jacket, and bell bottom pants. Her ears are pierced and she wears different colored heart shaped earrings every day of the week.

Hope you use her, also, this a good story thus far! - ~Waveripple

That seems more like his character. :P

It was a pretty good chapter. You are getting better at writing them. I hope you continue since I want to know what happens next. BTW nice choice. I love flygons!

Guh... how long ago did I submit 'm? Hrm...

BTW, he'd probably be a little more calm, but what'ev.

i luv your story you just have to write more,

and i hate haven to wait its killing me already ill be waiten

I love it so far. _"

The one thing I have trouble with is picturing a teenage girl as a Banette. It's weird to put together in my head, sort of like trying to picture a female Onxy. But that's a personal thing.

I really enjoy it so far, though. It's professional and well written. It's also believable and flows with logic. (as logically far as human transforming gets) Please keep on updating!

Seems a little rushed to be honest, yet still interesting and entertaining none the less.

I must admit this, I haven't read too many fics about ghost Pokemon, let alone a Banette.

Gunner out.

Curious, this may have potential. I would suggest that you leave one Glameow, having three to me just shows lazeness. Also it diversifies the character personalities if ya will.

Also, showing the Transformation scene also helps well.

It's obvious... Heh. Nice fic. I'll ask...

Taking OC's? (Just wondering...)

It's nice to get what you want but, what were to happen if she became a pokemon that she doesn't care for? What about one that she can't stand?