Do you even know what a genjutsu is, you nitwit? Please die.

GAH! Sorry but this is a pet peeve of mine. Konoha did not use 3 man squads. You seem to be ignoring the Jo-nin commander. Go watch the show again, they use FOUR (4) man squads...

3 genin plus one commander. and thats only for those right out of the academy. pay attention when other teams aside from genin are put together. Except in extreme or unusual circumstances all teams have 4 members.

Hokage guards? 4 of them.
ANBU teams? 4 of them
Scouting teams? 4 members

its nearly always a group of 4 ninja

Well a lot of it felt like a replace Kakashi with Obito, but have events turn out similar kind of thing, save of course Obito actually is a bit better sensei. One thing that stuck out is Obito had them working on elemental chakra control before even finishing water walking, and then they did various chakra control exercises and such, but waiting for wave for tree walking... The other thing that stands out here is Hinata totally shut Haku down, yet Haku pulls off Crystal Ice mirrors right after? That seems odd. Beyond that, why would Haku bother with an ultimate technique just to kill Gato. Senbon should be more than adequate for Gato.

Hinata is water tipe in the canon what help here create her own gentel fist stile, and she is not like any other Hyuuga. She is shy and have an open minde not like the others in her clan (sorry I'm not english so my english isn't that good)

good stroy but the family thing its great but dosent that make hinata his stepsister i mean just wondering

yet another story left alone for years... why are so many stories like this? why can't there be any fully updated ones? PLEASE UPDATE! o.o

Please continue this story its the best I'be read so far and I've read fanfics for years please continue

Im not going to read one more chapter of this boring story. Whats the point of doing fan-fiction if your story is going to be even suckier than the canon story line.

Hey, could you email me your estimated calandar of chapter updates? email to

Why did you abandon this story?

A really good story so far. There's not a great deal of divergeance, but the concept of two people against each of the Sound Five is an interesting change.

Keep up the good work.

I've been reading this story for a while. Most of the time, readers worry about Super! Naruto. In your fic, I'm forced to worry about Super! Sasuke. Naruto's victory against Neji seemed to come out of nowhere. This disproportionate skill set could start hampering the story a lot. I hope the coming chapters start developing his skills and deviating from canon a lot more in that respect. Thanks for sharing this story.

You've got to continue this; it's too good not to!

What cant it happen like this :'-( :'-(:'-(:'-(:- :-P good chapters though

...wondering about the fourth member of Team Minato...

up to this point I'm more wondering who's the 4th of the Yonnin?