Reviews for Hidden
seeyoulaterbye chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Hmm...that's a pretty interesting idea, actually. It'd be cool to see where it goes in your other fics as well.
OrianPrime92 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
OH MY GOD YES!-immediate favs-
SkyHighFan chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Nice, but I think Bee just didn't like Alice because she was a bitch and she was trying to get Sam to like her instead of Mikaela. I don't think he realized she was a Pretender or he would have killed her himself instead of leaving Mikaela to do it.
recyclablefoxx chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
I look forwards to the next chapter, if you're still going to write/post to this story. Miles is actually my favourite character, but I really can't find any stories about him. Glad I stumbled across this one :D Keep up the good work!
ShiTiger chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Great idea! This was really interesting. I wish we could see what would happen if the Autobots or Decepticons found out. I wonder if Miles and his sister would be about the same size as a human in robot-form.

ps: I always thought Rewind and Eject were male... well, if Cybertronians have a gender at all, anyway. Either way, very interesting!
Meiza chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! I remember seeing this on your LiveJournel account! I'm so glad you're posting it here, you'll get so much more attention and love for it! :D

I love the concept, I love the attention on an oft-ignored character, and I would love to see how you would incorporate ROTF elements. I have images in my head of "Miles" and Sam with their backs to the wall, and Rewind having to transform and fight off the threat all cool and stuff.

Which would lead to a really awkward conversation afterwards. :D
Witch08 chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
love it! i absolutely love it! u have to continue! please! and where the heck is ramhorn? again, please continue!
Carmilla DeWinter chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Woot. The way you completely turn this thing from normal to surreal is quite amazing. It also makes me wonder why the four are hiding in the first place.