This was good. I like Bart and I think him adorable, and you really captured an angsty moment with him well. Plus, you have a nice writing style that I really like.

Great fanfic. I love to see come more Chloe/Bart fanfic.

Okay, this was awesome! You even made Bart a Diniver supporter! YAY! this was perfect for Bart. Him being so far away, and having all the angst and not even letting Oliver finish his sentence. It's perfect. Bart would, of course, avoid anything about Chloe making a lifetime commitment. it's fine when she dates because that's not so permenent, but marriage would definately sting for him. This is being favorited! great work!