I really like this story are you a fan of supernatural. I think it's cool that you're using bits in pieces of what's in supernatural in the story. Hope to see more of the story soon as you can.

In the beginning of chapter 1 you stated that he could not feel anything, but later in the chapter, he suddenly could feel his cheeks? Good story ether way.

66k words is FAR from epic length.

Can't believe how MUCH I cried~~! O_O That means you're a VERY good writer to do that~~! O

I see potential in this story, unique as far as Naruto goes, But would it be possible to suggest such monster's as became famous in Mythology?

Succubi, Corrupt Nymphs, Treants, Trogdor, Cerberus, Etc?

Can't wait for the story to be updated again

few things. crosses are used only in christianity. as a memento of crucifiction of their lord and saviour. no other religion uses it. also asphalt is a by-product of creating petrol out of crude oil. there are no indications that the narutoverse is familiar with this branch of industry.

one of the crapist fics ever

ok. it took me 5 chapters to review.

first of all, nice and original.

second. the first four chapter are crap. make no sense, your constant POV hopping and flashbacks make it impossible to keep up with the story line.

third. naruto is pathetic but that is ok.

fourth. WTF is with the weapon. a celestial being gave it to him and only him and anyone can do with it what they want? one would expect that the ultimate weapon would have some kind of failsafe to keep others from using it. also, why should naruto get another weapon when he already has one. and better then blessed?

Good story. So has Naruto forgotten about the Colt and the person that was observing his test did HE return it to Naruto?

The Colt is dangerous and if let it out into the world could do great damage. So was that future foreshadowing I just saw?

I look forward to reading more keep it up!

very good so exiting please finish it, don't abandon it.

You should have Naruto fight a manticore or !Better how bout a cyclops

keep going

holy shit! Cant wait to see what happens next!

I so like your story.

when are you posting again? I so can't wait

please please hurry and finish the next chapter

hmm you should probably know that something like the council can't choose were a person would be buried. But the argument of people disgracing destroying and disrespecting Naruto's grave and maybe the ones near his can be made. just saying something like the council refused to allow someone to be buried in a certain spot annoys me to know end and seeing as you are a good author i thought i should make a mention of that. btw im glad to know there is someone out there making a shot at a decent supernatural fic and not some half assed piece of shit like almost all the others. (or yaoi)