HARRY EVERYTHING WILL BE OK I HOPE ANYWAY

POOR DRACO I FEEL SO BAD FOR HIM

POOR DRACO

oh nooooooooo you are horrible you know, PLEASE CONTINUE.

oh poor Draco, that was really needs help.i always love the stories about powerful and TOP Harry AND of course SUB work.

great story, i love the idea of powerful Harry and little sub Draco, but poor Draco i hope he will be fine.

Lov it

I can write it too. let me know if you need any help.

I could try to write smut...might not be very good though

I love it! Don;t let Alex get you down. Besides why would someone even bother reviewing if they don't like the story? If they don't like it they should just not read it they don't have to flame someone for it!

I like it! Hope you get your new version up soon!

this is really good. if you continue, i think you should show more of harry's softer side, more of his feeling towards Draco. good job!

You should really try to get yourself a beta, thus a lot of mistakes and spelling errors could be avoided in the future.

Magonagle? Repeat after me: Mc-Go-na-gall! There are many possibilities to at least check the names even if you dont possess the books, for example at the Harry Potter Wiki.

Furthermore, try to be more specific and detailed about things. Dialogues like “Ok and how badly hurt was he?”

“Really bad, you should get him back to Hogwarts as soon as possible” are rather pointless.

Oh, and just so as to avoid confusion: this isnt meant as a flame either, you should try to accept it if people give you advice.

Good luck with your further writing.

O i like a lot, idk if i have revwied b4 or not, but i just re-read them and i really like adn i think you shoudl update soon.

I think you can get a relaly cool plot here, but if you get stuck, and its a long time in between chaps you cna just do some smut too :P HOPE YOU UPDATE

hey, I like this, and I am really glad that you didn't pull this. you should use that flame to toast some marshmallows. :]