There isn't a lot that I can't imagine Joshua doing.

You should definitely do more Roxas/Neku stuff, cause this was very entertaining. I have actually enjoyed the whole thing. It sucks that there arn't more people writing for this pairing, because honestly, I find it adorable! You've done a great job with this and I hope you keep writing for this pairing. It really deserves the attention of good writers.

...I don't know who you are or where you spawn from, but my dear, you are inspirational! I love your descriptive knowledge of clothes, and your writing style is mesmerizing! I loved the feel to the story, and how you wrote it made it completly unique. I will be gushing about this to friends later. www

Keep up the amazing work.

This was definitely one of the...weirder pairings I've read. Somehow, you made it work. it was a little strange, but it worked.

Also, congrats on making Shiki such a major character. I'm always fond of yaoi fics where nice, not ooc girls actually exist.

Neku in a skirt. lolwut. why, Neku, why?

Bo: EPIC STORY! COMPLETELY LOVED IT!

SKi: agreed~! You did an awesome job writing it! 3

Mm. So so so, finished TWEWY yesterday and decided it was time to wading through the archives of The Pit-and look what I've found! *grins*

AU crossovers generally aren't my cup of tea, but for a pair like Roxas and Neku I'll make an exception. *beams in your general direction*

Um, about the fic itself, nothing really stood out to me as jarring or vastly OOC, but I'm not really sure I could put a finger on what exactly kept my attention hooked.

Just. *repeatedly bashes head against wall* What happens when you shove Stubborn1 and Stubborn2 into an apartment together? Sex ... eventually. *shakes head*

I already told you what I thought of this over on ye olde LJ, but. I read it again! And I want to add: you make me ship things I didn’t even know I could. You’re like a… mind-opening drug. And you get me addicted, and dependant, and then I end up in withdrawal because I can’t get enough; you’re unique, and it’s hell trying to find more of what you make me want. *needs to stop thinking in retarded metaphors*

Thanks again for writing this!

Finally a Roxas/Neku pairing! XD On that note finally a TWEWY/KH crossover that doesn't have to do with saving the universe or the like! I not only love your story idea but I am also glad that you care about proper spelling, grammar, punctuation and space between paragraphs. They aren't story-elements but they can make or break a fic, especially to people who click the back button as soon as they don't see those elements like I do. I will be waiting patiently for your next update. ;3

The one thing I wanted to say in another review but never did, and now it'll be out of context, is that regardless of the fandom, I'm able to read and enjoy your work. That is the mark of a good writer with good ideas, good characters, good plots. That kind of baseless appeal isn't something I think a lot of other writers, both fanfic and in general, have the privilege of.

I've liked Neku as a character for awhile, but I've never had anything valid to read until a couple weeks ago when you made that FST thing for him that I downloaded (lurker alert), coupled with the writing. I remember it was emotive and believable, not unlike what you've written here, which is, let's be honest, awesome as all fuck and apparently going to be continued. (Chapter 1! Not labeled complete!)

"Neku had chosen at a very young age to starve rather than suck cock."-I am a fan of strong sentences. It says something, it means something, and it's not filler. It's unapologetic, which is an aesthetic that is more than just admirable. It's unapologetic the way all real writing should be.

"...he occasionally babbled and Roxas waved him away with a subdued smile," and, "...but when you had a best friend like Axel—all smart mouth and offense..."-I love contrasts, love love love them, and the first line in particular feels so in character, which sounds kind of like a stupid compliment, but it's rare to find words that fit exactly right. People are forever trying to shove Axel and Roxas into their own versions of them, words that are ill-fitting, but these two strike me as lining up perfectly, visually.

Sometimes I worry that authors think that, by quoting, it's like saying that these are the only good parts, but the entire thing is good parts; a story made of good, strong sentences and perfectly articulated characters.

The shortened version: PLZ WRITE MOAR I LOVE NEKU AND ROXAS OMG. Also, is it possible for you to write something bad? I mean, really, do you have to be this awesome ALL THE TIME?